Sparkler has no Friends

Sparkler Doo has just started her first summer in Ponyville and already has plans with her family. Why should she have friends?

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FicusCat

FicusCat #1 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

I really like this kind of stories.

Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #2 · Apr 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Hm.

Not bad.

~Skeeter The Lurker

InsertAuthorHere

InsertAuthorHere #3 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

Hmmm...this was a pretty good one. Nice job.

punzil504

punzil504 #4 · Apr 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I know it says "complete," but I think you should consider writing additional chapters to this story. Sparkler doesn't get a lot of stories written from her point of view, and the concept of a Doo family vacation from her perspective is intriguing.

Potato Pride

Potato Pride #5 · Apr 29th, 2013 · · ·

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.

Firebirdbtops

Firebirdbtops #6 · Apr 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I recognize many of your influences, which is nice. However, you really need to edit this. Much of the sweet tone this gives off is squandered due to mistaken homonyms, poor punctuation and several poor word choices.

Mares Guyver