I'm Comma-Kazie; grammarian, nitpicker, and all-around master of feels.
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This story is a sequel to From the Mouths of Fillies
As her battle with cancer draws to a close, Ditzy Doo spends her final days with the ponies closest to her. There is so much for her to say to her friends and family--so much in so little time that she might forget to say one of the most important words may go unspoken.
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Cover art graciously provided by Meadowshrine.
A side story to From the Mouths of Fillies and Saying Goodbye, and a semi-sequel to What's in a Name.
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Dammit Comma, why did you have to do it again? Wasn't once enough? And for Cloud Kicker Month, no less?
Now I have to go fix my feels. Again. Because you enjoy doing horrible yet incredibly well-written things to ponies. Ow. My poor feels.
Sad story, as usual.
The feels, all of the feels. But now that you've gone and done it, mayb you can write happy Derpy where she doesn't die of cancer?
And still proud of that one line.
Well... That was depressing. Sad and depressing. Why did you have to go and kill Derpy?
Damn you and your terrible, evil, well-written, and extremely heart-wrenching sadness!
Good story, it made me want to cry a little bit...
Comma-Kazie - quick question
Quite a while back you were doing a story "whats in a name" Prequel.
i said to myself i would wait until it is finished to read the "winning pony' series.
any chance it will be updated.
also good little heart warming story with this fic, wish she didn't have to go.
Beautifully written and masterly formatted.
Oh, Derpy...
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I THOUGHT I was handling it pretty well. Then I hit the end of CK's section. Oh my god why. :(
How many times can we kill this poor pony in one universe? Why does it never get any easier? D:
The dinky part of this story is heart wrenching, the cloud kicker part was depressing and rainbows part made me shed a tear.
However, the sparkler part made me bawl my eyes out.
You're killing me...
I can`t see right.. all my tears
Seriously... I am crying...
I'm literally crying rivers.
Perfect. Sad, heartbreaking, even tragic but perfect no less. You know how to write stories like this one, and I salute you.
I hope you will update "Changes" and "What's in a Name" soon - we still want to know what will happen next in those bad times and better ones.
Congratulations on very well-written story.
read while playing these
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! NOT AGAIN!!!!!!!!! Y U CEEP KILING DERPYYYYYYYYYYYY
at the very end. ........ by chaos.it's like everything just....broke.like everything just fell apart.oh dear.and derpy couldn't say i love yoy cloud kicker before she passed. .....now that's sad
...
This looks familiar...
What I find intriguing is how you can take what is practically the same scene with a different point of view and make it heartwrenching every time. And it doesn't feel repetitive or tedious either.
Well done. You can definitely feel the desperation in their dialogues.
Congrats you made me cry.
Darn it
dammit comma why? why you do this?
greaat, now all we need is a sparkler pov and we got the whole she-bang
....a very nice story.
Excuse me.
*goes to hang self*
On a side not, GODDAMMIT COMMA!!!!!!
*briefly grazes over story*
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I think this is the fourth different perspective that we're reading this story from... Dinky, Cloud Kicker, Rainbow Dash, and now Ditzy herself. (I might have the order wrong, but that's the order I read them in.) My sentiments echo Swiftest Shadow's comments... very nicely done.
I'm now curious and concerned at the same time (concerned for my feels, that is) that there will be a version of this from Sparkler's POV coming soon... and that one has the potential to be really dark, not just sad.
........ So say we all......
Tears where shed.
A very good job at invoking emotion, draging the reader into the heart of the story.
Aw, man... getting all choked up. I'm gonna go listen to some sad music now, okay?
For the sads:
Comma you glorious bastard, you never fail to rob me of all my tears!
At this rate I'll have to rename the section of my profile page from "Great stories that made me cry" to "Stuff Comma Wrote".
Keep up the good work!
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Damn you, and thank you.
I made an account just to comment, like and favorite this... and now I know that there are more in this that show the same sadness from other PoV's, and I don't know if my eyes can take it... IT'S TOO DAMN SAD!!!
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So I saw this, and I figured it was going to be really good. Then I thought: "No. It's going to be too sad and hit too close to home." So i didn't read it,
Consider that a compliment.
Why you do this to my mom?!?!?!
................fuck me
Bloody frack.I just read the entirety of the Dead Derpy universe in one sitting. You know how much courage it took to do that?
You and Chengar have real talent, if you ever get a non-fanfiction novel going let me know I'll give it a read in a heart beat after I finish finding my emotional center.
Suffice it to say bravo, no book or movie has ever gotten me to cry this much. More to the point I don't think I've ever enjoyed crying this much either. Odd. But I'll narrow it down to this particular story your characterizations are pretty spot on, though if this was any other fic I think Rainbow Dash's self defense mechanism was played a bit to much yet you some how made it work without it being 'awesome' every two sentences. That last bit of fading though is just plain evil painful.
I look forward to more of your work though next time I'm going to find a tissue box before hand. I caught dem allergies for sure and its not even my normal alergies.
Have a muffin.
Dammit, hit damn close to home. But instead of my mum it was my grandfather.
Thank you, Comma, for a good story. *goes to clean his face*
I can't read it...I'll be too sad.
Nooooooooo!!!!!!!
Stop writing dead Derpy fics! You make me read them! This is actually so sad that I was really crying. I hope that your next fic pulls a 180 and has a super happy theme. There's too many sad fics here.
Write a happy Derpy fic next!
I expect this to be an accurate representation of everyone who reads this story.
Again, Comma! Again!
But seriously, a wonderfully sad and emotional story. Poor, poor Derpy and family.
Stop making me cry =(
*See's name of the fanfic*
*Looks at the name of the author*
Oh, not you again. What is it with you and writing fanfics that involve Derpy being on the brink of death.
Favourited, contingent on getting another chapter of Changes, since we desperately need to see how this shaking out (and because I desperately want to give Dinky a hug).
Stahp killing Derpy Comma, just stahp.
Amazing.
I don't know why, but I love these DeadDerpyverse stories.
They just... I don't know, they leave me thinking. All day.
That ending.
Beautiful.
Why do I keep reading these?!
As someone who lost her mother two years ago, I can really relate to Sparkler. I was thirteen, and even though nobody came out and said it, I knew she wasn't gonna make it.
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I'm so sorry to hear that. You have my condolences, for what they're worth.
2641710 This. Just...this.
*Sigh* Goodbye Ditzy.
2650154 You have my deepest sympathy. You have lost a mother and I thought I was miserable when I lost my grandfather almost 6 years ago.
