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Lorhelei


"Sometimes I worry. Does it make me a bad pony—to wish I could hate?" — Twilight Sparkle, I Forgot I was There by GaPJaxie

Nov
11th
2019

Twisted future... · 6:49pm Nov 11th, 2019

I didn't wanted to say anything and probably no one will read this blog but... Well...

I was considering to cancel all of my stories. Including Twilight's Element.

I wrote that last chapter to try to prove me and everyone that I wasn't able to write like I did it before. I told to myself that if this chapter had no reads whatsoever I would quit writing...

And... Well, I got comments of people that liked it and wanted more, I even got a few favs...

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Nov
11th
2019

Twisted future... · 6:49pm Nov 11th, 2019

I didn't wanted to say anything and probably no one will read this blog but... Well...

I was considering to cancel all of my stories. Including Twilight's Element.

I wrote that last chapter to try to prove me and everyone that I wasn't able to write like I did it before. I told to myself that if this chapter had no reads whatsoever I would quit writing...

And... Well, I got comments of people that liked it and wanted more, I even got a few favs...

Read More

Report Lorhelei · 118 views ·
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Hehe, thanks. All credits to the artist thou:

https://koveliana.deviantart.com/

Nice MoonDancer profile picture. =3

2527743
Oh, I use MS Word, but it doesn't check the tenses, at least not as much as I want, and I'm really bad at them.

I'll look for it, Thanks! (If there is the good and the bad... Where is the ugly? Hehe)

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I read the first chapter yesterday and so far I got this:

The good: the pace from one scene to the next ones feels natural and is really comfortable. Also, I liked your choices of words.

The bad: you have a lot of grammar issues regarding the tempo used on your fics. Try to use grammarly, Is a really good tool that will help to you out through your journey as a writer

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