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Lorhelei


"Be happy for me, and for all who fly free"

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The new School of Friendship is opening. Twilight had everything running smoothly after the incident with Neighsay. That is until she found that she still needed one last teacher.
Starlight had an idea.
One that Twilight wish she hadn’t.
One that will haunt her scholarly halls for all eternity. Or at least the ripe old age of eighty or so. An idea Twilight believes is an act of unbridled desperation.

Twilight needs a teacher, and Starlight knows somepony who is always free.

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Comments ( 13 )

You definitely wrote this before episode 14. Trixie was actually doing very well as a teacher until that idiot Discord interfered.

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Yeap, indeed, haha. That's why I made that clarification.

Good story, i just advise you to work on your english, and always proofread. You have a good number of spelling and grammatical errors. Thumbs up for idea, though!

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Actually, I have a proofreader and an editor, but they are working on other stories and since this was a oneshot and I had it stored for so long, well, I tried to "my own power" (with disastrous consequences as you can see, hehe). I have a lot of problems with tenses :applecry: They do not translate directly

Thank you very much! I thought it was too simple or generic. Thanks. I'll send it into the queue and eventually will be uploaded with a lot of corrections from the editors. Should I put a mark on the sinopsis that say that? That it lacks of proper edition and will likely be edited later? Real question ,hehe. :twilightblush:

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If it were me, I'd try to fix the problems by updating chapters. People are less likely to read if you say the story has issues.

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Hum, okay. Thanks :twilightsmile:

I'll do that as soon as the editors have the time, hehe.

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I'm glad your story is doing well. I wish mine was the same.

Anyway, like I said, good read :3

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Why do you say that? D: What's wrong with yours?

Is in these kind of moments that you remenber how usefull was the time travel spell

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WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE FRED!?

It's a shame that she destroyed the spell. One wonders if she could make copies of the Journal Of Friendship, why would not she save a copy of the spell before destroy it. (TOTALLY not Spoiler of another series of mine. Cof. Wink.)

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I can go wherever i please >:v (as long as my country allows me to do so).

M8 staph with the spoilers (unless you want to know the impact of certain future event. If thats the case then ill be happy to know).

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It's a Spoiler from a side Story, it doesn't have a real impact on the main story. Worry not :3

Look on the brightside. No Cozy Glow, and no Neighsay. Maybe on that last one. If this is set after the Premier, then they already dealt with him.

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