• Member Since 17th Jan, 2013
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Cola_Bubble_Gum


I'm an irritating fangirl who also writes. A lot of my stuff is sad. I am sometimes overly sex-positive, so if you are sex-negative, I might have called you an elitist taint jockey. Sorry about that.

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An old doctor, a mare and her filly, and the secret project to create obedient cloned monsters -- just another day in the life of Stable 23.

Except it's the last day.

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Oh, fuck, it's sad. Awesome, ofcourse. Feelings and all shit... :fluttershysad:
Though, I am not fan of 'dead end' stories. Many people likes them, dunno why, honestly. Something like "I have too good mood, let's read something to kill it :pinkiecrazy:". I love FoE not because it's a lot of corpses around. Because it's about progress and success first of all. And setting makes it looks intresting. And I not hide I love happy endings. Why not? If characters successful in story, why can't they be successfull until the end? Seems logical for me.
Anyway awesome story. You already complete more FoE stories than most writers. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I actually cried a lot writing it! ^.^ Couldn't be helped. I cried and cried through Pink Eyes, but I'm a sucker for a story about a filly and her mom, and...yeah.

I'm not usually into heavy grimdark, but I'd had the 'doctor has to put something they created down along with themselves' kind of story bouncing in my head a while, and this felt like a good way to get it out of my head. ^.^

Personally, as sad as they are, I am a fan of "Bad End/Dead End" stories, as they show that not everything can or should have a happy ending. Feels were had.

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I'm glad the story worked for you. That was my goal -- make the reader feel something. :)

Finally something that doesn't involve gunfights and snapped ponies in FoE universe. Good job, Cola.

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Awww, thank you! :)

I always feel like the FO:E setting has a lot of untold stories of what happened in Stables as their inhabitants died, through whatever means. I figured I'd try to tell one. ^.^

2338440 Now, say, how about writing more? :pinkiecrazy:

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Wellllllll...I probably will? But I'm working on an FO:E fic called Long Shadows that's shaping up to be, um, long. :twilightsheepish: But the shortfics tend to help me wash my brain out a little while I'm doing editing on LS chapters. :) So there'll probably be more, just not on any predictable timetable.

I'm really glad you liked it. :)

Your book has been advertised on the new fo:e facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

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