Well done sir. I keep giving out stars lately, and only have 5 left. I hope that's enough.

Although i didnt get anything still very nice.

You have a mass of confusion in the center, starting with the concert and ending after the rose section; you change gender pronouns about four times a sentence and then mix up Midnight and Luna. Might want to fix that so people don't have to do I i did and reread it five times.

Glad to see you guys loved it.

223281
That's the one. I love that song. It's been the emotional theme running throughout the whole entire set, both fics.

223738
Thanks for pointing that out, fixed.

wow
nice tug on the heart strings
i loved all the ending
next story please
that is all
kthanxbai

wow
nice tug on the heart strings
i loved all the ending
next story please
that is all
kthanxbai

I implore any of you who read this comment, to read Nexus' Dawn grave-visiting passage very slowly in the soft voice of John Hurt, whilst listening to the following song:
Silent Pray - Two Steps From Hell
That's a memory I can promise you will last for a while yet in my mind.

i got lost was this over time was the last scene her great great granddaughter or somthing ohh and i love this series

259984
Yeah, the scenes are passing through time. Think of each scene as years and years after the last scene.

The little newborn is Luna's great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandniece. (Talk about a 'distant' relative! )

362180
Sigh the sad part is that you are right I feel for the chararters and I want so see what is gonna happen..

And thanks to you for writing this story

"Then came the ducks."
I can only read that in the voice of Alan Rickmen

Also I'm not sure which ending I prefer as the canon ending now, the other one was a happy ending with a slightly sad tone, but this one seems bittersweet.

423034
LOL picture, and it's so true for the scene!

i found out while reading this ending that playing smooth criminal works wonders

505826
Interesting...

506438
you should try

518900 I dont get it...are you happy cause i cryed?

519889
Just that you like my writing.

Oh....I....dont like it....I...LOVE IT!!!

957560
Maybe, but dragging things out might have taken the magic out of the thing. Writing mulitiple endings in the first place was also pretty tough.

I didn't understand this one at all.
Did he die or didn't he?
It says he's in Ponyville and all but he had crashed into the ground and no one really talked to him or anything and what????
*Confoozled*

is this by any chance include Celestia X Luna shipping?

Beautiful, just beautiful!