'Nightmare Date' sequel in which Luna must deal with the consequences of her illicit romance
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FIRST COMMENT
ok now that was a good storie and it looks like i got the happy ending i was looking for...
i am pretty sure strawberry will get used to being a alicorn even though he didnt approve of the humilaiation of almost beng killed by "snoo snoo" but i am pretty sure that he will adapt.
im guessing chronos is celestias kid?
"Must... not... taste... Discord's... delicious cum..." Strawberry chanted.
Dude, I almost chocked on my own tongue. I had to wait a few minutes to get back to the reading after that.
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What is it with you and getting 'First Comment'!?
Do you expect a cookie or something as a reward?
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Give him some of Discord's delicious cum
I REGRET NOTHING
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EW NO!!!!!
*thinking* maybe 700 years extra life?
*smirking* probally not possible i AM a human after all...
(i swear if you pull off one if those last second switchs or something of a me being wrong nature i will... *i got nothing* D@@M IT!!!)
well anyway i am human and last time i checked only unicorns (maybe pegasues to) can get that whole year booster...
*thinking about how much control authors have over stories*
er... i AM HUMAN RIGHT!!!!!
NOW WHERES MY EXTRA YEARS!!!!!
I wanted to make it ambiguous whether or not Chronos is Celestia-x-Strawberry's kid (adopted by Luna and Strawberry) and whether or not getting doused with Luna's magic totally made Strawberry into an alicorn (or just made him live a lot longer). It's up to the reader to decide. I might do sequels though that lean one way versus the other... but still you readers have the choice. I'm glad that you love this ending.
By the way: It's now time to write the Cupcakes ending! OH YEAH!
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I never really liked the fourth wall anyway...
lol
if only i could die by "snoo snoo"
that is all
kthanxbai
Thanks to Doctor Whooves for the song!
Added as the end link! LOVE THAT SONG! LOVE YOU GUYS!
Maybe it's just that I'm a bit tired, but I had a hard time following this chapter. Strawberry lived at the end, right?
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I kind of left it ambiguous whether or not became an alicorn or just got healthier, but yeah-- he lived.
EPIC ENDING!!!
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YEAAAAH!
It was a nice ending so to speak, though I wish you had gotten a bit more in depth on maybe the wedding and raising the kids in flashbacks or something. Felt a bit sudden to skip that far ahead. Would have also loved to know Strawberry's thoughts on life and what not.
what was the public's reaction to this
[among other questions]