'Nightmare Date' sequel in which Luna must deal with the consequences of her illicit romance
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This whole ending was more of a writing exercise for me-- i.e. "Can I, Swiper, write a grimdark story with explict gory parts without giving up in the middle from frustration"?-- rather than a serious thing. So, I expect this probbaly will come across as one of the weakest things I've written. Still, it was fun. I hope you all enjoyed reading it.
Two little things:
1. Yes, that's Strawberry and Midnight. They're alive and fine.
2. I imagine Celestia is alive and more or less okay. I wanted that to be left ambiguous to the reader, though.
Aww psyco Luna died, that makes me sad.
Nice reference though-Sunny Days ftw!
204491
no offence but
NOPE
celestia is most likely dead becuase of what luna did to her either that or luna used herself to do the rest of the ritual...
204491
I STILL BLAME DOCTOR WHOOVES FOR ALL OF THIS
What do you guys want to see in the random/troll/comedy ending? I'm a bit lost.
Well shit. Thats depressing
204944
Discord
To many Alicorns
Hay bacon strips
Mothra
Finally 47 pounds of waffles
203036
well after reading the ending and compareing it to "cupcakes" i have to say this...
if you were trying to get to the "cupcakes' level then...
*inhales*
*yells royal canterlot voice right in swipers face* YOU ARE DOING IT ALL WRONG YOU ARE SUPOSE TO BE AS DARK AND GORY AS POSSIBLE AND EVEN GO TO THE POINT OF MAKEING THE PERSON INTO A COMPLETE AND OTHER PSYCHO-PATH!!!!!
*exhales* they aint the only one who can do that you know...
ok now like i said...
wait did my talking burst your eardrums?
205299
I'm listening to this song right now, so I didn't pay much attention. My ears are safe.
I didn't say that I'd make it "cupcakes" level. I couldn't do that since I said I'd put sex into it. Plus, Luna would never kill her husband. Luna also wouldn't hurt too many ponies on the way-- even as Nightmare Moon she held back from causing too much grief-- during her evil magical process. It was more of a gory labor of true love than mere violence.
205219
I'll take that under consideration.
205371
ok swiper you want random well heres random knocking at your door....
make pinkie just spontaniously pop out of nowhere then make a whole lot of people from random stories pop up to becuase pinkie brought them and pinkie feels that you story needs a serious party and just starts a random party then midnight comes out of nowhere and joins the party then all of a suden all of ponyville is in the party includeing clestia,luna, and stwarberry then discord shows up and makes it rain waffles and syrup and everybody eats the waffles then karon (from another story) shows up with alcohol and everypony gets drunk off their asses and after it is all done strawberry is suddenly a alicor after the party and then you show up and party and the party continues all week long!!!!!!
205549 also include that into it.
that random enough for you?
i expect my reply in a days time... *starts timer on watch...*
204944
Include
Royal Guard Tictac Chasing me for giving you sick ideas
205549 you, what have you done.
INTO THE FUCKING SUNSET
nicely done
cant wait for the other ending
that is all
kthanxbai