'Nightmare Date' sequel in which Luna must deal with the consequences of her illicit romance
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BURN IT WITH FIRE!!!! is all i can say...
Oh Luna... At least she will liuve a good 170 years. But that was just a prediction, and predictions tend to be wrong. Everything will be different.
Ha. How very dark.
Will there be a happy ending after this? Not sure.
Are you going to do multiple endings again? If so I can easily see more than a few sad endings.
Well, interesting chapter and I will agree with the other comments (so far).
I would only like to point out:
"She felt somepony's hands going along the sides of her face."
"He put his hands around her neck for a moment to make sure that she could still breathe."
No, realy, hands?
I REALLY hope this is not going where I think it's going...
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Fixed, thanks.
I still kind of wonder about endings. I'm thinking of making maybe, say, three endings:
1] There's a clopfic-y ending where Celestia decides to just do Strawberry since she wanted too so bad as Luna (with the necklace)-- and then she decides to have the real Luna participate as well. (So, from his view, it's clonecest of them atop him). And then they get married and have Midnight, and things end a bit ambiguously as to what happens afterwards. There might be some surprises on this front as well.
2] Ending two has them marry and have Midnight. Luna then deals with the morality in a way that's bittersweet, but still sweet. I want the very ending in this part to be kind of a happy surprise amidst the sadness-- so it's hopeful.
3] Ending three has Strawberry warm up to Fluttershy and then Luna grows more distant as she realizes she can't deal with losing both Strawberry and her daughter. She then cuts herself off. There might be surprises here too.
I could maybe possibly have a cupcakes ending where Luna tries to make Strawberry into an alicorn so that he can live forever-- which is a horrible blood and guts procedure. But I don't know.
What do you guys think?
188165 Ending 4, all the way. Do It for immortal Strawberry!
Barring that, ending 1.
id say go with all the endings really. i loved how you ended nightmare date with the 4 different styles. but really in the end it comes down to what you feel like writing.
Sorry but my opinion is there shoul be NO MORE CLOPFIC!
Couldnt you simple write a second , clopfic story for everybody who wants it?
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You've left me with Clop or Sad
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You win this round, but I'll be back
(I'd roll with clop only for lack of happy option)
From my point of view your clopfic idea wouldn´t make a lot of sense, which would be my only complaint.
Maybe have 2 (more or less) happy endings and 2 (more or less) unhappy endings?
You know, from sugary sweet to yay to awww to OMG WTF WHY DID YOU DO THAT? ^.^
I am kind of surprised that there is no "Luna can not deal with the loss of both her possible husband and daughter" option.
And then there is the question why Luna would only want one kid (Though that might have to do with good names ;) )
Well, I have a 'canon ending' in my mind. But I still want to explore other options.
This is all tentative anyways, but... I can confirm for sure that there shall be many alternative endings. I guess that's kind of my trademark.
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if anything i would say go with what you did last time and have all 4 endings...
just make sure to give a warning on ending 1 and ending 4 (ending one becuase it is sex and ending 4 becuase it is cupcakes all over again)
also could there be a 5th ending in which the prediction was wrong (at least on the aspects of the daughter and maybe there actaully being some other way besides the "cupcakes" way...)
pretty much a "hapily ever after" ending (becuase the best posible outcome ocured)
you can think about it.
(wonder if anyone will respond)
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