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Chuckward
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Chuckward
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Pffffft. Fuck's sake, why am I laughing at this. Props for an ending that I in no way, shape, or form saw coming. Kudos.
Inb4 "meddling kids and their dog."
Do tell what fabulous language you are speaking.
2161179
Fixed, thanks for the heads up.
lol nice reference and ending
...
That sure was... interesting...
Oh god, why
I couldn't help but notice two typos. One, you used 'at' instead of 'as' at one point (It's like a scavenger hunt, I'm not going to tell you where). Also, you used 'their' instead of 'they're'. Normally I wouldn't even point such things out, but I'm feeling extra nazi-tastic at the moment.
As for the story, I have to say your writing is getting much better. I enjoy your varied word choice throughout the story. I try to use interesting words when I type instead of making everything boring, so I have to respect when other people do it as well. Perhaps it's just me, but I get really annoyed when I'm reading something and people use the same descriptive words (like 'quickly') over and over again.
Grammar and shit aside, it was a funny story. Now behold, mortal, as I bestow upon thee a like!
Da fuq
Dat comma at every ™.
These need to have spaces before or after.
And now, the REALLY cliche ending: "Trixie, wake up! You're on in ten minutes!"
Nicely done, otherwise. Who says teens have all the angst?
The Great and Powerful Trixie™, eh? It seems eerily appropriate.
+1
2162386
Sorry for killing you...
I knew it was old man jenkins all along
Why.
Fucking why.
2171668
I was bored.
I was eating cereal while reading this. When Booth appeared I lol'd and now there is a mess.
Sorry, but i'm downvoting. Things happen for no apparent reason, the very def of a random tag. This is tagged comedy, bjt all the jokes are based on the chaos of the ending, or Trixie making random choices.
I don't read random fics for a reason.
2176127
Have fun with that.
2176127 9/11 was funny.
2176127
>reads and comments on a random fic
Of course, there's always the possibility that the random tag was added after your comment... in which case it wouldn't be quite as amusing to me.
2212791
I'm sorry, but I did add the random tag later.
Why would you?
How could you?
When did you?
Who killed you?
What did you do?
2176127 Sir, you thirsty?
wat
Old man Jenkins? I knew he was up to no good!
2283377
He's a crafty one.
The-Necromancer approves of this story. It is delightfully silly. We also like the trademarks, most fitting of Trixie. Pity, as yer commentary makes out, they seem to be of a more practical nature...
Dat twist! Dat twist. M. Night Shyamalan would be proud of you.
So, this is one upvote and a nice and usefull moustache for you.
