You are a horse.
The only serious thing I've ever written.
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Chuckward
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Chuckward
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It's beautiful.
Neigh.
Neigh! Neigh, I say!
Dat plot twist.
I liked the part about "Neigh"
This story ...
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That was the best story i've ever read!
Neigh you say?
WHINNY!
This was, I think, a very controversial move for this piece, but taken as part of the whole, this passage ultimately unifies the narrative and is the driving force of the central tragedy. It was, coincidentally, my favorite bit.
WELP.
This... this is truly why we exist.
This is a masterpiece
True meaning of life as we know it.
woof
The dialogue needs a bit of work, the action scenes are fabulous, but you might want to work on the run-on sentences, walls of text, and maybe just tidy up the romance between them. All-in-all, I give the output of the story a ten, while the way it could have been put an eight.
You should get a proof-reader to fix up those places in need of a comma, and you'll have a top-notch story on your hands.
The tragedy just makes you think, you know.
'Lovers torn asunder' types of stories is great way to bring a tear to your eye, and a smile to your face.
This piece of literature (may I say art) is truly an enthralling and heartwarming piece.
Now this is what I'm talking about when I say "dialogue". Extremely fitting, credible and compact.
This sudden change of language could have denoted a lack of ideas in other stories, but here... genius.
I laughed. Hard.
Best story... nao.
*makes bad horse pun*
He rides across the nation, the thoroughbred of sin!
Maybe the Everfree is demonic, and he was just Bad Horse.
Wow. Good work, man
Neigh
I cried.
It has passed moderation.
Still wondering how...
Oh cool, you translated the story from horse.
Needs more horse-porn.
I think I need to fix my eyes because I can't see what everybody else sees.
CLIP NEIGHING CLOP
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Did you not enjoy? I find that understandable.
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Not that, the fact that what they're quoting from the story are things like...
Or...
But what I read is...
I think I can read 'horse'.
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It's a bit of an inside joke.
2613046 You can, in fact, read horse.
Also, Chuckward, that story was melancholy as fuck.
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I don't happy.
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I am le master debater.
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gud
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I was trying to make a funny comment.
No one cared about you until you put on the mask.
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Nice fic. The 2nd person was good, and I'd think if horses could write, they'd write something like this.
Now that's what I call horse literature.
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