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Onyxfire408
Hi, I'm just someone who just writes for fun. Don't expect great stories from me, or a lot of productivity. I'm also a Samurai if you've seen me at Babscon.
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That escalated quickly
2032259Meh I'm not really good when it comes to making stuff take longer, so i just become vague if I can't make up anything
"Crescent a hardcore Assassin's creed fan was living in a boring old town. He was truly in love with the game, he was almost committed into the assassin order. He practiced parkour, acquired a few replicas of weapons and costumes, and took the liberty of crafting a hidden blade. He had it all, but never spent time with anyone special to him. He always spent his time alone, he had no friends, but his only friend was the moon, especially when it's a crescent moon. Little did he know that the moon was actual going to talk to him on a stary night."
bit of a loon, is he?
followin'
2035374Yea but not obsessed or crazy right? I mean a perfect example are us brony fans making fan fiction, art, and dressing up and what not, so yea he is what is is, just like we are bronies
Wen is the next chapetr????? awsome work!!!!
2041558Well i just posted chapter 2 and I'm hard at work on 3, just yknow thinking
Wait, why didn't Crecent put his outfit as soon as they reach Equestria? If he was nervous that someone will attack him. The most obvious choice will be to arm himself and prepare for the worse
just a little bit of spelling mistakes but no ones perfect also try to make longer chapters say a chapter once every 3 days but make it over three thousand words long?
also unless you want to release a unholy hell spawn of dislikes DONT PONIFY HIM trust me
why they start playing assassins creed 2 and not assassins creed 1
2044251Because Luna wanted to play Crescent's favorite game. And to be honest, I don't like the first game, don't get me wrong it's good but only for like the story and eden and what not.
2044141You'll see what i'll do.
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Please write more soon
2076445 Please read my latest blog for the latest progress on the story, I think you'll hate me but trust me, to me it's not easy.
I applaud thee, great chapter keep it up
what the hay is wrong with Blueblood
? is he really going to fight with an Assassin?
i always knew he was stupid but ... Damn
two lines cresent could say during the duel agenst blueballs
2091891He may be a prince but that doesn't mean that a prince can learn a few things as a foal. You'll see what I mean in the next chapter
this will be a fun read.
Blueblood is a prick
2092795Agreed
the story is quite good, but try to make things sloooower and avoid using names many times in a row.
Crescent x4. Try to find a way to call same person differently, this will improve the overall quality.
Also duel: oh god, a unicorn with a sword. what is this i don't even. dash towards him, wallrun, then dive on him with a hidden blade out. Assassination successful. Actually not. I don't think Celly could tolerate that. Even if he's a jackass, he's still somehow a prince.
2093881First An assassin, (or in this case a fan) doesn't kill the innocence or the civilians.
Second. Why would an assasin kill royalty? they kill templars and killers.
And third. I'm glad you like my story
2094271 comepair blueblood to a templer and you will find anuff reason to kill him trust me also Vittoria agli assassini
2096025Let me ask you this.
Has Blueblood done anything wrong towards the ponies of equestira? No tyranny, no plans, no nothing? He's just a big douche
Oh please tell me the next chapter will come up soon. I can't wait to see this duel. I hoped I doesn't end with scars or lost limps or eyes.
Also Assassins (or in this case a good fan) Had the agility, the flexibility and the technique of disarm (at lest I hoped he learn that trick from the game) that move will easily end the duel AND incapacitated Blood for a couple of days without killing him.
I do hoped he had a sense of honor and will not use magic. Then again if he lost a fair fight I bet he will then just try and stab him in the back…and then he will answer to Luna, and in the moon if the magic hit Crescent.
P.S: I don't know if you have something plan but if you can, make Crescent have the famous eagle eye, from Luna, from Equestria itself, from Twilight or another unicorn, but if you can think of a way, don't heisted on put it. It will be so awesome.
2096109 ... good point
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2096157 It's almost done.
Nice chapter, and Crescent being bath by the elements? Hmmmm did I detecting some clue to some future powers? Only you on next chapter could tell.
And I'm curious when Shy mention that Crescent remind her a pony she meet, either their are assassins ponys (It will be interesting seeing assassin Octavia) or just a pony from Fluttershy past.
Oh it will be kind of awkward is now result that the pony Crescent reminded Shy was her older (and/or decease) brother. It will be like Shy becoming like the little sister for him, like Sofia was from Ezio.
FYI, when Rarity was describing herself she said fascist.
Yes
great chapter men (or pony or ... whatever, you understand)
i was thinking why is luna slepping in the night? but now i know why!! ... she is so doomed
Free travel to the moon!!!!
2096907I'll fix that.
2096851It's nopony you know. He's a shadow and quiet *wink wink knudge knudge*
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My lips are seal, oh I can't wait to see what happen next. I hoped in some point he will be using his skills to the fullest
2097379 I'll be sure to keep that in mind.
By the way, I think I got it resolve, he has the hand and hand experience of Connor, the white weapon ability of Ezio as well of his charms and manners, it only miss what attributes he has of Altair. By the by, did the hidden blade is the blade from revelations?
2097572As I told maner fans, You will see.
2097572 No the hidden blade is from 3, why do you think I had Crescent hold it like a dagger? Or like an epee blade. But anyways Crescent's blade is from 3, you'll be surprised what else I have installed for my next project.
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I can image but as I said, I will wait to see. I just hoped the next chapter will come soon
yeesssss very gooood
OH SHI~ SHARINGAN!!
give me sight beyond sight and this is my comment and i found it lame
Sweet, and since he can move I said he have the advance eagle vision, maybe he have the vision from revelations in witch he don't only see the auras but also a tray and a shadow of his objective.
This can be very interesting in the future, I hoped the eden apple make a cameo or appearance at some point, I bet that with Luna at his side, he can rest assure that he will no experience the nasty side effects
you sir have made my day i thank you
well duh yes your stupid if not
I hope your happy because I'm taking a break on this story to work on the other one.
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I edited a small part in chapter 6
I changed the stallion's voice/ syntax. Help's for future story
And the adventure begin, you know he had all the assassin abilities, but now I wonder…how is he going to hide in crows and become invisible in play day light? He is double the side of all the ponys, not only that but the press is already into him and word of him being Luna coltfriend will be heard in a couple of days at most. He just become a celebrity
Also, did he will search for a job later on in the story?