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Join Tim Jones, as he makes his way through the universe to the place of his dreams. Will he ever return to his home or even figure out how he got there in the first place? What of his actual identity? How will the ponies find out? Read and find out.

The story is on fanfiction as well as here so you will see thanks from both sites

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 39 )

3074197
Yea after I read it I said the same thing. Expect a new chapter One.

3075072 il what till your story has more chapters but is luna include if so thank you and if not can you add her?

3075445
She is a fun character to mess with so yea, I was going to add her.
I will make it extra special just for you.

Is Tim jones a earth pony or unicorn or peguse or a alicron?

3075905
Still human but maybe with a twist:trixieshiftright:

3096964

Working on it:pinkiehappy:

Expect it in one to two days

Sup

Which ever one helps RD open up to him.

human.


Very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

another very good chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

CJN

Whens the next one?

3233926
Working on it, sorry that it is late. I had pneumonia:pinkiesick:

Sup

Next chapter please:fluttercry:
I do have to say that I like your human better than most because he can alternate between his human form and an alicorn. Keep up the good work, and you'll have at least one view in me, and get well soon

3236791

My great grandad just got over his 7th bout of Pneumonia. You doing all right?

I noticed a bunch of errors, but they're not that bad. Good so far, and it kind of sounds like The wizard of Oz.

me likey. errors here and there, but it's not bad enough for my OCD to go off.

I'm probably late about the OC from thing but can you stick mine in? Same name as my account. My bio is pretty much a short explanation about him.

dude, I freaking love this! and from a comment I saw, I'm going to guess that the ring in his mind is going to cause him to transform into a pony.

voice? odd, it kinda reminds me of the Night Angel Trilogy.

Hows about him being able to switch forms at will? But only his human form and his Alicorn one.

3286946
Yea I'm doing alright now, and I am working on the chapter but it will still be awhile. Family vacation:duck:

3288796 that makes sense. Family comes first, so take your time. I'm glad your doing better.

Whop whop, Brock writer block and I'm not dead anymore:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::applejackunsure:

another very good chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Oh! Oh! A blood coated stallion with heavy muscle build with short black mane and heavy beard. Cutie mark will be... Two scythes interlocking with an equine skull on top. (think of legendary symbol from halo.) give him a sophisticated voice British. Yeah. His eyes are... His best feature. There colored just like Celestia's mane. I give him the name Angel Eyes.

3299565
Um alright, nice description there. What kind of pony is he? What is he good at?

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Damn it forgot to mention earth pony.

Forgot to mention one more thing he has a weapon. A scythe from the bones of a dragon with a sharpened white scale made for the blade. (Think Grimm Reapers scythe from Dante's Inferno Game.)

He has a magical connection to his scythe where he his able to stand on his hind legs and use it like a bipedal being could.

Woo! great so far, Tim, where did you pull those knights from?

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it will be nice to have him in the Infil / Exfil. I have my cardboard rock, so that sould make sneaking easier for me. (Sorry, I like to RP, and the cardboard rock is based on M.G.S.)

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Truly, I don't know. I feel like they are from somewhere but I don't remember. Does anybody/pony know:rainbowderp:

*clears throat and sprays the breath spray stuff before adjusting tie* What a twist.
:facehoof:

Mystic Spell? wasn't it Mythic in the previous chapter :twilightsmile:. it's all good, if there is one thing I understand well, it's school and the problems it comes with. (I'm a senior in high school)

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Sorry plz I fan. But in all realism I'll get on it. Dang spell check :twilightsheepish:

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lol, it's all good. As I said, I understand school and it's problems. :twilightsmile:

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