I'm about to go to bed and all of sudden I get an email on my smart phone. I then proceed to open it and my reaction was exactly this:
"F**k... Sleep can wait!"

Now it is over and I am a very sad man

yay cool story time

Then they had another adventure on their bed! The end.

1957750 Pretty much. Best ending ever.

Shall be reading this when i have time

Awesome story man! I'll be rereading this some day.

when im old and re reading my 300+ Favorited stories ill re read this and go...

i remember when i first daaawww'd at that.

good job

Make a sequel, please.
And also quite the amazing story, so much dawness and other things
I gave 5/5 moustaches

"This mere gesture was more than enough to reduce her to tears, jumping on top of you, saying yes, and then proceeding to make love to you in the water. That was an interesting time."

Even with a romantic, sweet, meaningful time, you STILL managed to put in humour that had me laughing. While it may be over, it was a damn good run.
Cheers.

This is so good I doubt there is any way to fuck it up at this point.

OH SHIT...

I just jinxed it...

Wooohooo the ending is ther going to be a sequel

i am the 100 like woohoo two in a row

Congrats on your story. It's very well done and it deserves a reward. 5 out of 5 mustached spikes for you!

Through out reading this, I pictured two pegasi sitting in a dark room. One of them being the brain, the other being the body, and them arguing over stuff the whole time. I made it that much better. But not by much, cos it's hard to surpass 150% awesome.

Possibly one of the most heart-wrenching, teargasmic, wub wub stories I have ever read. I LOVE IT!

Adoption...filly...pegasus. hmmmm <-- A little sidestory about this must be done plez

Awww, I can't believe it's over. This was so romantic, I really loved every chapter. I read it all at once, is it 3 in the morning already?

Mawr!!!!!

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*ahem* needs a fucking sequel

the best story EVER!!! really...how do you wright like this? its really amazing.

“Done.” You kiss her again. She chuckles at the kiss, and you move your head down a bit, rubbing yourself against her chest, feeling the fur on your cheeks. You move a hoof down to her finely tuned stomach, and prod at it with a giggle, before kissing it. You look up, but then, something changes on her face. The smile that she was displaying has disappeared. She looks down at her stomach, rubbing it, with a sad expression. “What’s the matter?”
“This is all…so great.” she looks into your eyes, “I just wish that I could give you something in return.”
You can tell that she’s referring to her being infertile. That she cannot create life, has been torturing her all this time, treating it like an open wound that will never go away. You couldn’t bear to see her like this. She has always been a strong mare, stronger than you will ever be, but whenever she is down on herself…it breaks your heart.
“Hey,” you take her hoof, and put it on your cheek. “Don’t talk like that. You’ve given me everything I could have asked for. A friend, a loved one, a wife, all rolled into a perfect package.”
“But…I’m not perfect. I can’t…” her eyes water, “I can’t make us a family.”

THE FEELS!! THEY BURN SO GOOD!!

So lovely...

I am not one for clop, but i chose to give this a read. and, wow, i am surprised to say this was an amazing story. great job. have an upvote and a mustache

awsome story hope there is another one thats after this one

As long as there's no death of Spitfire in this, I'm game...man I had too much feels because of that fic

2571363 Well, I do like JonTron.

2568015 is that fic The Night That Never Ended? I crired during Spitfire's death in that too.

Finished the story after reading the second half of "a guard for a princess"... Its 6:10 AM and loving it Thanks max for another great story...see you tomarrow night ^.^

My heart... It burns with the feels of a thousand daws... Oh, and a couple more things. First, did anyone notice it linked up with The Milkmare of Trottingham? Pretty cool! And is it weird I gave 'My' brain a Brooklyn accent?

3268890 It's actually linked up to my other two stories; My New Life In Equestria and She's Having A Foal, with a chapter in the latter story dedicated to that interview.

And no, I don't think it's weird that you gave your brain a Brooklyn accent, that's actually pretty cool.

3269654 Yeah, I gave myself a regular voice and my brain was from Brooklyn. I laughed at myself XD

YAY! Everyone's happy!............ Wait what was that about a human in..... BZZZZZTTTT
sorry about that. Discord here. I'm just getting this idiot out of here before he does something stupid.
Hey! I'm not stupid! Your stupid!
human. Shut up. I'm the freaking god of chaos. Now GIT!
FINE! Gez.....asshole
I heard that....... Just for that comment I'm turning you into a plant again.
*POOF*
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

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wut.

4695380 I'm still not sure what shit I was on when that was typed....

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i.imgur.com/enjnWSu.jpg

4698328 lol

In the words of the winning pony!!!fimfiction-static.net/images/avatars/10885_128.jpg?1396415166

Okay, this may have replaced my favorite fic. Damn I loved this one!

This even surpasses d'awww.

Yep, another great story. Finally found time to read it :D

P.S. I...must...not....cry.... This is so beautiful

Damnit! I don't want it to be over! This was such a good story. I know it's supposed to be a short story and that was a really good ending, but I hate it when stories end! I wish it could continue. I can see it all in my head playing out like a movie or show and I just don't want it to end. But GG. GG. Excellent story.

Coming up, our interview with the first human in Equestria, and his recent marriage to…

That one made me laugh! By far most stories, if they're not that kind of story, they would never mention humans in Equestria. Now this is kinda that kinda story without being that kinda story.

*reads back comment* Ookay that sounded more logical in my head.

Loved the story! The only thing that I felt was off was that they tied the knot only weeks after they decided to be officially an item... That's... just really fast (even if they've known each other for 2 years), and IRL often leads to heartbreak further down the line. But I'm nitpicking, really.

Great story. I enjoyed it right from the beginning. Good job!

This is still one of the best stories on this website IMO

“Looks like it’s all sunshine for this happy couple. Coming up, our interview with the first human in Equestria, and his recent marriage to…“

Hi Anon

“Looks like it’s all sunshine for this happy couple. Coming up, our interview with the first human in Equestria, and his recent marriage to…“

PARDON MOI?