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GrizzlytheMedic


I put out fires, write stories, other fun stuff in between too~

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now this is how to hit the ground running.
this chapter really comes out of the gate hard and is looking good.
harts fire
P S I clam first post on a new story.

The chapter was short, but good. COOKIE FOR YOU! :pinkiehappy:

I really don't want to be that guy, but your description is kind of contradicting.

Dave and Spitfire must do whatever it takes to get home and keep their child safe, even if they have to give their life to do so.

One can not give their life in order to go home with their kid

Spitfire down already. I just died a little inside.

>> ThatGuyReadingYourFic, Sees what you did there :facehoof:

She better not be dead or hell and brimstone shal rain down upon you dear author

You named the human "Taylor" from your "bon bons lament" story, this human is "David"
That is the ONLY mistake I can find. :derpytongue2:

But I have to say...DAMN YOU FOR WRITING THINGS THAT HITS MY "FEELS" BUTTON SO HARD THAT MY EYES WANT TO WATER UP BUT I FIGHT IT SO HARD THAT MY EYES BURN!!!!!¡I!!!! :flutterrage:

Still love the story though :twilightsheepish:

BUT THE BURNING IS STRONG!¡i :pinkiesad2:

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Fixed that. Got caught up between the two stories. :twilightoops:
I love pushing the feels button on people. It appears to be a special talent of my writing both here and elsewhere.

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I can tell :rainbowlaugh:
Category 5
Bon bons lament
Wake of destruction
They all hit the feels button like a "street fighter" button masher. :twilightangry2:

What the hay man the princesses should have a rule about no couples with kids together on the front lines. Also where's rainbowdash she's a wonderbolt to, well reserves anyway. :rainbowdetermined2:

Comment posted by TheDiscontent deleted Feb 23rd, 2015

Why is this on hiatus? WHY?:raritydespair:

Lay down ; try not to cry ; cry a lot
I just died a little when she was shot

Wait, this isn't in line with the ' lament' series, is it? Because I thought Applejack was with that Jake guy

OOOOOHH NOOOO :raritycry: WHY IS THIS IS ON HIATUS!!!??? WHHYYYY!!!!??? :raritycry:

When will the next one be out and dose spitfire dies

Oh man this is just getting bad I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter keep up the good work man hope Spitfire survives this though:fluttercry:

Been almost a year I'd like to know what happened.

When is the next chapter? :) I need more :)

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