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i.imgur.com/RXtaw.png You posted something!

I'm happy for this story! Mustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Reminds me of an old Instructor I used to have. :derpytongue2:

Well written and rather amusing.

When I realized Zecora was rhyming across consecutive lines, this turned into an exercise in focus for me. I was getting distracted by how Zecora could either predict what Twilight would say, or pre-emptively figure out two or more rhymes. oe perhaps she learned Equestrian from reading poetry, and that's the only way she knows how to speak it?

That TwiCora was most excellent. Both sexy and amusing (and yet another ship I haven't seen!).:ajsmug:

Zecora was offer her back and sitting several feet away,
of her

A few more nibbles and soft kisses rewarded Zecora with several more squeaks and small gasps from the purple unicorn.  “How is your focus?”  
I believe this has no rhyme

1823948 I know not how she came to speak in rhyme. I just know that she does it all the time. :ajsmug:

1824610 It saddens me that TwiCora is such a rare ship. I knew it wasn't common, but I didn't realize it was considered unheard of. :pinkiesad2:

1824707 Ah, missed that typo. Thanks. Meanwhile, "How is your focus?" was a short interjection, not a full 10-syllabal line of dialogue. In the show, the majority of her lines are in full Iambic Pentameter, yes. But I seem to recall at least one occasion where she gave a short statement or interjection in non-rhyme. And it seemed like a sudden interjection to help Twi regain her focus seemed more apt and logical in that specific situation, rather than a full rhyming couplet.

There is some method to my madness, I assure you! :rainbowlaugh:

Wow ... That was a great story I would also like to learn from Zecora Where to kiss, lick and bite. :pinkiehappy:

I thoroughly enjoyed that. Quite a fascinating test of concentration from a devious teacher, but Twi's skills will always need honing.

I liked the pacing and Zecora's rhyming seemed to flow pretty well interjected with Twilight's speech. Those were a little jarring at first, as it didn't feel right until the rhyme completed. Worked well though, and has whetted my appetite for more TwiCora.

about time someone has done a zecora fic.:pinkiehappy:

Molestia's got nothin' on Zecora!

The evil enchantress without compare, in methods of how to please a mare! :twilightblush:

1) there are a few times when Zecora didn't rhyme
2) this reminds me a lot of a twlestia fic i read a wile ago

great fic. only one problem, though. zecora is an herbalist, not an alchemist. there is a huge difference. an herbalist is holistic healer of sorts and an alchemist is this: Alchemy is an influential philosophical tradition whose early practitioners' claims to profound powers were known from antiquity. The defining objectives of alchemy are varied; these include the creation of the fabled philosopher's stone possessing powers including the capability of turning base metals into the noble metals gold or silver, as well as an elixir of life conferring youth and longevity. Western alchemy is recognized as a protoscience that contributed to the development of modern chemistry and medicine. Alchemists developed a framework of theory, terminology, experimental process and basic laboratory techniques that are still recognizable today. But alchemy differs from modern science in the inclusion of Hermetic principles and practices related to mythology, religion, and spirituality. (yay wikipedia!)

I enjoyed this more than i should've. Really liked how you set it up and how zecora was apologetic when she almost crossed the line. Really good job setting it up and hope to see more quality fics that have some story like this :pinkiehappy:

Oh wow, this fic is still getting a lot of hits and thumbs up. Awesome! :rainbowlaugh:

1846804 Actually, I was going more with the "Alchemist" definition put forth by Skyrim and most other fantasy settings, where the alchemist is more of a mix of herbalist and apothecary rather than the traditional chemist/philosopher definition. MLP is a setting heavy in fantasy and fantasy tropes/archetypes, so I figured it wasn't too big of a leap in logic to just call her an alchemist. Plus, due to the popularity of Skyrim and other fantasy settings and materials these days, I figured most readers would make the "herbalism and potion brewing" connection before they made the "ye olde chemistry scholar" link.

Still, nice to know when people know their history, and call me out on potential inaccuracies, inadequacies, or flaws in my material. :ajsmug:


1845787 Huh, really? Odd. It rhymes perfectly for me, if you read it in Iambic Pentameter. Though, perhaps we have a difference in pronunciation for some words, creating subtle variances which throw off the rhyme. Damn, didn't think of that... :trixieshiftright:


1903961 Thank you. I quite enjoyed that scene, myself. And yes, I've got plenty more on the way. Got about a dozen fics in varying stages of planning and writing, and my current project is a nice little bit of DashFire. :rainbowdetermined2:

1984206 oh. ok. didn't see that angle. yer welcome!

Now that's what i call magical magic lessons. :twilightblush:
I had a real blast reading this, thank you. :twilightsmile:

The only bit I found the slightest bit disagreeable was the friends with benefits thing Twilight had with the guard, doesn't seem like Twilight to me but it's not that big of a deal so whatever.

Great story, Zecora needs more love.

. . . *pomf*

Giggity.

All of my yes in this fic.

Well that was funny to read.:pinkiehappy: Is it wrong that I feel annoyed by Twilight's sexual experience with a guard.:rainbowhuh:

Nice work with Zecora by the way. Had to have been tricky.:twilightsheepish:

1845787
I think I read the same one

Your lack of rhyming disturbs me. Otherwise, fantastic fic XD

Well, good story. 4,5 out of 5 (the story flow didn`t feels natural and i don`t think that real charackters would be sooo horny and sooo "friendly-trustfull". Everything else is good)

“Focus fof-fof-focus foc-c-cora oooh Zecoraaaa,” Twilight groaned involuntarily as she found herself teetering on the brink. With her muzzle buried in Twilight’s core, Zecora simply smirked and give one final, powerful lick. “Fo-fo-F-F-FUCK!!” Twilight screamed, throwing her head back as she lost all control of her body and mind, and willingly fell into oblivion.

Made me laugh for a 30 seconds :rainbowlaugh:

Feeling Twilight’s inner walls loosen their grip on her muzzle, Zecora withdrew, sat back on her haunches, and admired the results of her work. The unicorn was left breathless and swaying as if in a daze, her marehood quivering slightly as a few final aftershocks ran through her. Finally, Twilight visibly slumped, lowered her tail, and let out a deep sigh of contentment. “That… was amazing…” she panted softly, noticeably hoarse. Without a doubt, that had been both the longest and most powerful orgasm of her life. “I feel… I feel… wow…”

Such a scenery... :twilightsmile:

“It looks like you kept your concentration,” Zecora remarked, her voice audibly colored with amusement. “And you’re also good at transmutation.”

Twilight continued to stare at the lamp hovering where the red bouncy ball had once been. “I can f-fix that,” she said with a sheepish smile. “Just give me a moment to-”

Ooooyy... Good to see that Twilight with her magic capabilities didn`t changed entire Zecora`s house :rainbowlaugh:

why are the hot stories always from years ago

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