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This is a warning comment.

To anybody who missed the warning in the description, I CLEARLY stated that this contained incest and you can CLEARLY see the cover picture is of Luna and Celestia and you can CLEARLY see the mature rating, so you can CLEARLY calculate the fact that this is an adult incest story of Celestia and Luna... CLEARLY!:trollestia:

929637yea, i gotchya.:twilightsheepish: anyways, dont wanna fill up the comment thingy, so in five secs, non serious comments will be trashed. sry! from now on, seriousness please, like this guy.929634 need more likes and views, but your comment says ppl like it, so ill consider it.

DAFUQ!?!?!?! i liked it a lot, and i wanna see more but still..... DAFUQ!?!?!?!?!?!:facehoof:

Lol! i feel a funny mix of shame and amusement! :twilightblush:
But thumbs up, u should defintly make another part!

929764>>929840 positive comments, high rising view count, and plenty of favs... still wavering my options but i think we all know what my ultimate decition is going to be:rainbowdetermined2:

Hmm... Good concept, a pairing that is acceptable... The only large scale issue I have is execution of it all.... I'll keep an eye on things.

929634>>929668>>929764>>929840>>929876>>929894>>929920 With 147 views and such positive comments, not to mention the 16/2 liked/dislike status within one night... I will definitely make another!:yay:<yay!

One thing though, in order to make it interesting enough, I've decided to add a very attractive character. NO it isn't an OC character. Surprises await in the future... I just hope the new character wont plummet the story's rating!:pinkiecrazy:

i can see you changed it from complete to incomplete *yay*:yay:

930085 Got enough likes. May take some time but I think ch.2 will be good.:pinkiesmile:

“Damn it Luna, I’ve been working all day, I’ve had thousands of ponies up my ass and now you want to irritate me to? Cant a princess feel a little tired from time to time?” :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: made me lmao! Nice fic!

So, this is Celestia/Luna incest clopfic?

Proceed.

930462 lol, you like that? im adding comedy, cause next chapter is gonna be funny to!:rainbowkiss:

931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929894>>929840>>929668>>929634 Lets here it for 30 likes and over 350 views in under 12 hours!:rainbowkiss: Currently, in my opinion, my best fic I've written so far and things are going to get intense next chapter!

I'm working very hard on the new chapter. It will probably be posted by tomorrow, unless something comes up. Please don't respond to this comment unless that urge gets the better of you. Its just to express how excited I am about everybody liking it so far.:pinkiehappy:

Good story line, nice plot that should be developed more, but the chapter was too short for my liking.

931785 i'm pretty sure the next chapter will be longer. :ajsmug:

I don't like incest but if it's princest, I'm cool with it

932012 OH MY GOD! Every body except for 3 ppl like this. ppl who don't even like incest likes this! As my favorite character of any fiction might say: I'm so FLATTERED!!! :pinkiehappy:

932026

Your welcome. I bet those 3 people didn't like incest, but it was well written, at least for me, so I think that's why I liked it :)

Lunestia is not an uncommon ship, you know. I'm surprised you were so worried about it.

932370 yea, but i wasnt worried about it. i was scared ppl were going to be like "oh this sucks" or "ive heard this song before" ya know? its it being such a success that makes me all happy. :pinkiehappy: (at least what i consider a success.)

Winning. Incest may be wrong but for these two, it doesn't seem as bad. All in all, really good. Fantastic I dare say. Keep it up. Also, your plots joke was good.

Hubord68

(Twi's Innocent) - Scarlet Harvest

It's here!:pinkiegasp: I realize there are a plenty full of mistakes I need to correct but I've had this bitch up my ass for the past few days. Got my focus off! So sorry. No bull crap comments please, only critical perspectives and constructive criticism and your opinions on the story. This is the last chapter for this story, so it saying it's incomplete is because of the editing I still need to do. thanks for your understanding.

I think you did a great job!:pinkiehappy:. Do you know what one of my favourite things about this chapter is? The fact that the story is still marked as incomplete Lokking forward to the next chapter!

935949o_0 Uhh, read comment above... Sorry. I may change my mind if I am able to come up with more ideas and possible jokes but for now, I'm a little busy... Plus I've got writers block. This is what I look like>:raritydespair:<I don't have any good ideas left! I need some time to think!>:raritycry:

Another fantastic chapter. The joke at the end reminded me of the meme. "Do you like bananas? 'Cause your on the moon!" Just to let you know, I'll follow you 100% with whatever you do with this story. One recommendation, use Pinkie Pie next time. You never know what crazy shit she has up her sleeve. :pinkiehappy:

Oh. No more story...:raritydespair::raritycry:

936005 Very stressed and tired. Gotta... finish other story formally known as "Princess Celestia's royal secret". May wright another chapter... wasn't going to... but I never intended on writing 2 chapters for this story in the first place... If i get enough positive "Please wright another chapter" comments, I will though. anything for the fimfic-fans!

On another note, how do you ppl like the new cover art? Give your honest opinion. old or new? which is better?:eeyup:

New is defiantly better. About 20% cooler. :rainbowdetermined2: I'll have to check out your other story. :moustache:

936042thanks:ajsleepy:...:applejackconfused:...:ajsmug: sorry, dosed off there for a... min...:ajsleepy:zzz

for every 1 person who doesnt like this story, i have another 8 that like it! math rules!

937582... oh.. my:fluttershysad: if you say so... just give me some time...

Um did you use the term Bronies :twilightoops:
other than that just... have celestia and luna speak more royally
other than that .. keep it up :yay::trollestia:

937596 I can use that term if i wish:pinkiesmile: Lol screw the fourth wall! I'm breaking the fifth wall!:pinkiehappy:

in response to every Zecora line (yes even the Brony one): Nice.
hav a mustache my good sir :moustache:

944314 thanks. i wanted my zecora to be different from the others that rhymed, so i used the term brony!

944314>>937596>>936042>>935949>>932370>>932182>>931785>>931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929668 I am putting this story on hiatus to finish up the new successor story known as "Princess Celestia's royal secret." Do not worry, I have the full intention of writing a third chapter! It will just take time! I appreciate all the great feedback and can't wait to hear all of your comments for the third chapter of this story! Until then, please be patient.

946130
Awesome thank you :yay:
Usually people dont respond about their work and we worry
awesome now I can read your other work until then :trollestia:

946347 It's just not cool to not keep the readers informed. It's like a famous athlete not doing interviews. just not cool!:rainbowderp:

visit.946347>>944314>>936042>>935949>>932370>>931785>>931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929668 i have made a new blog titled "ASK ME ANYTHING"! feel free to

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