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Damn right it was. :ajsmug::heart::rainbowwild:

god damn i'd like to read those notes

Random fact: a pig's orgasm can last 30 min

You gotta wonder what those notes of Twilight's devolved into at the end. Going from, "It appears that the Pegasus female is deriving sexual gratification from the Earth pony's careful manipulation of plumage." to "Eeeer--aaaaugh!" >_< How does one continue taking cohesive notes in that situation?

Fic is still awesome ^_^ I approve of the change of the love-bite. I re-read the story just to see what you did with that scene.

.....Why did I keep reading after that point, you ask? Er....... research...


That was the best science ever.

I applaud thee for your work.

Excellent as always. Poor Twilight never knew what hit her. AppleDash hotness makes Celestia look cold! :rainbowlaugh:

Commence read.
For Science!

By this point, Applejack was massaging the joints of the outstretched wings with her hooves, alternating between rubbing gently being more forceful.

Think an "and" is missing here?

Comment posted by Avid Reader deleted Feb 8th, 2013


coitus interruptus


Yes, my science teacher also says that when blowshit up.

The downvoters don't know what they're missing. :ajsmug:

This was a triumph.
I'm making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction.
Applejack Science
We do what we must
because we can.
For the good of all of us.

Hmm, i gotta say that people down voting this fic didn't bother to read it. Well written, funny and sensual. All in all, a very well made piece.
I usually avoid this stuff since fimfic is overflowing with it, but i'm sure glad i was bored enough to read this one.
For science that is. :twilightblush:

...I need to do some studying on erotic preening, myself...

except the anti-cloppers,

But there's no sense crying over every clop fic
You just keep on reading each and every ship
And the story gets done
And you make a neat fic
For the bronies who are still reading

(not brilliant but hey, don't judge me :ajsmug:)

It was a little boring for my tastes. Maybe I was expecting too much plot in the clop but I got half way through before I zoomed through. The thing is, I can't even really find a flaw in the writing, it was just *clop parts* *clop parts* *clop parts*. I know its a clopfic and considering the length, you had decent pacing, but something still felt lacking.

That aside, I left an upvote, the writing is still very well done and it has a decent premise. I'd just like to see something more substantive from you.

Ok for SCIENCE!, and round three hilarious :ajsmug: I have to say that was well written smut and still cute in many parts :rainbowlaugh: Well done, I hope Twi will be able to find some pony to help her with her "science" eventually like RD found AJ :twilightblush: That would be an interesting story to read :pinkiesmile:

And i thought Combustible lemons were good science. :derpytongue2:

2092707 Whoops. Thank you. :twilightsheepish:

2093008 Brilliant. :rainbowlaugh:

2093034>>2093078 Also brilliant. :rainbowlaugh:

2093079 You present a valid critique, and it's one I can agree with. Thank you for you honesty, your constructive criticism, and your upvote. Also, you'll be happy to know I'm currently working on another project which features a bit more story and depth alongside the clop. Hopefully it will be more to your liking. :twilightsmile:

I would pay money to read Twilight's notes.

Can't find Chapter Two.... :applejackconfused:

that was really, really good fantastic job:ajsmug:

This is one of the few Clopfics I actually enjoyed... Very good indeed. Well done. :pinkiehappy:

2093008 Simply awesome. I love Adam Savage. Fantastic usage of that picture too. You deserve a Spike :moustache:

By the end the research was probably something such as:

And thus my full cerebral function lost control and my hoof shhhhooooooOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!
This fEeels soooOOooo gooood... oh.. ah... I c-could die right now w-with no reg-grets.. It seems my horn-writing became astronomically flawed during self-induced orgasm. I must do research on why this happened.

gentle rub the spot where fur and feather met,


The fic was arrousing as hell even though I've read it before, but it just didn't do it for me. I hope you write more, kinkier stuff however:ajsmug:

this fic was freaking awsome, my girlfriend will read this and then we will have a fun night

I loved every part of this fic. The build up, the two rounds, the voyeurism, it was all splendid! I can find absolutely no fault with it. None. Nada. Zilch. It is perfect!

haha the ending was so funny
Its time for round three aw hell yeah

oh god I wish I had wings I love Preening clopfics

See kids! Science IS fun!!!

Yay Appledash


I enjoyed this quite a bit. Very well done, a definite fav :pinkiehappy:

How did I not cum??

"Orgasm-Fried Brain"

These three words, made me laugh, alot harder than I should have

she’d need to make that Spike never saw any of those notes

You're missing a 'sure' in there.

your warning in the description box's are funny, awesome, and informative. always do them, they are too cool to not use!

Hawt be dis :ajsmug:

well shit.... now i really want wings:trixieshiftleft:

Okay, I'm not a fan of clopfics. And truthfully even though I saw the sex tag, I was thinking (hoping) this wasn't going to be too cloppy. I almost said screw it and left once it got heated, but kept on through. I was pleasantly surprised to find this is pretty well written. Congrats on getting a non-clopper to read a clopfic and LIKE IT! Instead of a customary mustache, I give thee a Derpy! :derpytongue2:

HOT! Thumbs up! :heart:

i wish this had some form of continuation or something lol :twilightsheepish: dont read clop to often but this was really good compared to most!

Good to see that Twilight has encouraged her friends to continue science even without her.


Well, she IS the most powerful unicorn in Equestria, so I'm sure she has special note-taking abilities. I mean, she is Twilight Sparkle for pity sake!

Felt strange listening to Science by SOAD while reading this x)
Amazing work you've done here. Quality romance through the heat, good use of character.. Nothing but fine words of approval comes to mind:twilightsmile:

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