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Please accept this gift of four moustaches for an awesome story. It's very emotional and very powerful story. It's also very well developed which I like. Just a few small grammar errors here and there, but other than that it's a very good story and I would be interested to see where it goes?
Ugh.
Dropped a like, won't ever read.
Great work, though you may want to work on the wall O' text a but. Dropped a like, and I hope to see more
You're worse than that other girl.
That's some crazy format, but a good story underneath.
YES. Cider <3
Loved this chapter! Anxious to see more! I'm a huge sucker for AppleDash Fic's
1817917 I am myself, I must admit. It is my favorite shipping. Expect to see more in the coming days.
1816319 Yeah, I felt like the paragraphs were a bit long.
Glad you're enjoying the story!
1817867 When I wrote it, I wasn't writing it as the alchoholic cider, if that's what you mean. But hey, if you choose to see it that way, that's fine.
1814940 Hey, I appreciate it. Thanks. Stay tuned for the next chapter!
i love this story! i was so excited when i saw you had posted another chapter i actually screamed my joy in public. now i'm not allowed in the store anymore, but who cares! boy i hope you update it soon, you writing is awesome!
Loving the story so far mate! I Love the way you write AppleDash! Your writing style is phanominal. This has to be one of my all-time favorite stories!
"Applejack! You're umbrella!" Applebloom exclaimed.
And then Applejack was an umbrella.
(your*)
But seriously, nice work here. I can't think of a lot to fault you on with this, Â aside from the wall of text layout. But that's easily amended - just put a few paragraph breaks in here or there. 10-12 lines is about an average paragraph length.Â
I'm about to get stuck into the second chapter now, so I'm looking forward to more of this (AppleDash is best ship)
Well, I see the paragraph spacing thing has cleared up!
This was a really good chapter. A couple of minor errors, but those aside, very well written.Â
Really liking the story so far, and eagerly awaiting an update!
Good job so far. Ill be impatiently waiting for the next update.
1857168 I really appreciate it. Expect the next chapter the day after tomorrow! Getting to work right now, actually.
Cool! Can't wait for the next chapter
I suck at words, however, it is going great so far. And it's nice that the focus isn't sex, really adds more meaning to the story.
As what other people would say, can't wait for the next chapter!
It might be best to space the different paragraphs. All I see is one block of text of which I have no interest in reading.
Thumbs up, (insert kind words of encouragement here), and keep at it. I'm glad to see a story about a couple, rather than something ment for people to beat off to.
1870963 Sorry, to hear (read) that. But I format my stories like actual books.
1872838 Absolutely. That has been my goal from the beginning.
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Bueno...
It is really refreshing to have a story like this.
Pretty much what Jackie said.Â
Another nice chapter, and awaiting an update!Â
The story is getting intense! I'm loving it! Keep up the good work!
(Joke) Alt. Title: The Pink Jack: Flying Bucks With Me
8,000 words?!?!
Must... begin... reading...
(Edit soon to come; standby...)
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GOD DAMNIT AJ, buck up and mother trucking take Rainbow back! I demand that this story recive a happy ending!
I want my D'aw levels to excede maximum safty levels it will be so happy!
Oh, by the way, increadible chapter. Love the story, love the (somewhat) refraine from basing it (their relationship) on sex. Bravo, my friend, bravo.
Gah! I kinda want to punch AJ. She's being so dumb. I know she's purposefully blinding herself, but its annoying that she's taking her ganny's advice so literally. AJ lied (about not feeling guilty when she snubbed Dash's displays of affection in public) when she was getting the advice, so its not even accurate in the first place. Plus, its mean of her to lead Caramel on in some misguided attempt to follow what she thinks her society's "norms" are. Like Dash said at some point or other, no one else in town gave a crap about the whole Lyra/Bonbon thing, right? AJ's screwing stuff up because she's scared of something that probably wouldn't even happen even if she did come out.
All I gotta say is nice work. Hopefully things get worked out before too many people - er - ponies are hurt. If this drags on too long I don't know why Dash would go back to AJ. I mean, she's purposefully hurting her, even if it is only to try and quell her own confusion. Someone who loves you shouldn't do that. So, anywho, nice work, and I look forward to reading about whatever you come up with next
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!
MORE! 
1950789 Honestly, I try to make scenarios in my stories as realistic as I possibly can. For example, just because no ponies explicitly talked to Lyra and Bon Bon about their PDA, doesn't mean no ponies were sitting back and judging them. I have a gay friend and it happens to him all the time. He went through the same thing Applejack is going through in this story right now. It sucks because he's a legitimately cool guy, and doesn't deserve for people to mess with him the way they do.
1949964 You'll just have to seeeee!
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That makes sense. I have a gay uncle and he didn't come out until he was thirty - he was like a completely new person afterward, like her could suddenly be himself properly, and he was a lot more fun to be around. It just seems that Applejack is in the tough in between phase and so is making a bigger deal about it than she maybe needs to. People are always going to be silently judging others. When it comes to the things you want, you have to decide at some point whether you're going to let others rule your life or take charge on your own. Which is what she's going to learn, I'm guessing. Anywho, thanks for replying, and I hope your friend is doing alright
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GAH, all the teasing! It needs a happy ending at least, right?
...Right?
Man, I haven't teared up like this sence the end of The Walking Dead game. And that was some real sad shit. Just like this. GAH, Y U SO GOOD AT PULLING HEARTSTRINGS?!?!
I want to think that a happy ending will come of this, but I think it will be like, well, the ending to The Walking Dead: sad, tear-jerking, but satisfactory. The ying (black on the Ying Yang) in this stroy is to damn high. Can we have a small increase in yang at some point? Please?
My heart. It hurts...
1985260 1986713 Wow...I never really knew about how much of an emotional effect this would have on some of my readers! I'm so thankful for you guys!
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I'm glad my wounded heart makes you glad. Keep up the kick-ass writing.
God knows I could use something like a new chapter to cheer me up right now
2010822 Worry not, my friend! The next chapter should be up by Sunday.
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Good.
At least somethings going good this week.
And the drama climbs to a whole new level! I'm still holding out for a happy ending for the S.S. Appledash, but I'm not sure how it could happen (if you indeed take that route) so I'm looking forward to wherever you take this next. At least one of their other friends knows about the relationship now - maybe AJ will realize that her friends will accept her after she finds out about Fluttershy, and thaw to the idea of dating Dash publicly? Or maybe Fluttershy will shoot her disappointed looks and her resolve will crumble right then and there
Anywho, nice job 
I LOVE IT~! I can read this over and over again... and never get tired of it!
I'll wait payiently for next chapter
F*CK YEAH!!! YOU KICK ASS, YOU INCREADIBLE PERSON YOU!!! I knew this would have a happy ending!!!
Also, World So Cold by Three Days Grace. Theam song of this chapter. Gives me feels, bro. Gives me feels.
Yay! As things kept getting worse I didn't know how this was going to turn out. At first I was wondering if some sort of Flutterdash was going to come into play, and then I was worried about how far Applejack would go with Caramel, and then I was thinking that maybe Applejack would walk in on Fluttershy and Dash just snuggling (platonically, of course
) and get the wrong idea. Then there was the whole fight scene, and Applejack sobbing and yelling under Dash's house was pretty heartbreaking, and just when I was about to pass out from all the angst - cue happy makeout session! I swear, you've got a knack for drama. And there ain't nothing wrong with a nice long chapter - the more words the better, I say (so long as they are actually saying something,) and in this case, they most definitely are. So, long story short, awesome chapter, and I look forward to wherever you take this next 
Oh, GAHD! It seriously hurt my heart to write this chapter.
Now, as a loyal AppleDash fan... THE PAIN, THE PAINNNNN!
2034407 I appreciate that so much, man! You rock as well!
2035166 Yeeah, I'm a drama junkie. It makes for good reading!
2032304 Not exactly sure what you tried to post there...
2032500 I'm glad you're enjoying this!
*Browsing favorites. Sees chapter 8.*
HOLY SH*T, NEW CHAPTER!!!
*Begins reading*
Edit soon to follow, standby...
Yes. This pleases me. The happiness, the acceptance, the giggity...
You have touched my heart once again.
I love this story. I'm glad it's finally getting some positive responses! Keep up the good work!
I love this story I can't wait for more.
Well.. that ejaculated quickly..
I liked this chapter
Can't wait to read more.. because I need my sleep now..
how dare they make pinkie pie cry! they should burn in tartarus for this horrible deed!