Rainbow Dash and Applejack realize their romantic feelings for each other, and the hardships that they will include. *APPLEDASH SHIPPING*
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Please accept this gift of four moustaches for an awesome story. It's very emotional and very powerful story. It's also very well developed which I like. Just a few small grammar errors here and there, but other than that it's a very good story and I would be interested to see where it goes?
Ugh.
Dropped a like, won't ever read.
Great work, though you may want to work on the wall O' text a but. Dropped a like, and I hope to see more
You're worse than that other girl.
That's some crazy format, but a good story underneath.
YES. Cider <3
Loved this chapter! Anxious to see more! I'm a huge sucker for AppleDash Fic's
1817917 I am myself, I must admit. It is my favorite shipping. Expect to see more in the coming days.
1816319 Yeah, I felt like the paragraphs were a bit long. Glad you're enjoying the story!
1817867 When I wrote it, I wasn't writing it as the alchoholic cider, if that's what you mean. But hey, if you choose to see it that way, that's fine.
1814940 Hey, I appreciate it. Thanks. Stay tuned for the next chapter!
"Applejack! You're umbrella!" Applebloom exclaimed.
And then Applejack was an umbrella.
(your*)
But seriously, nice work here. I can't think of a lot to fault you on with this, aside from the wall of text layout. But that's easily amended - just put a few paragraph breaks in here or there. 10-12 lines is about an average paragraph length.
I'm about to get stuck into the second chapter now, so I'm looking forward to more of this (AppleDash is best ship)
Well.. that ejaculated quickly..
I liked this chapter Can't wait to read more.. because I need my sleep now..
Some confusion between "it's" and "Its" as well as "You're" and "Your". Apart from that, really liked it.
However! The shipping moved quite a bit too quickly. There was little to no build-up, it felt a lot like one of those "Flip-a-switch for love" which I, quite frankly, don't think are all that good. More often than not, it feels a bit shallow as there's no build-up of romance.
"Where earth meets sky" is a great example for a shipfic where there's build-up.
Regardless, I like it so far and will continue reading.
great story....loved it!
Good chapter to start off with.
Awesome beginning to what I am sure will be a fantastic story. I have been eagerly awaiting the completion of this story, and now that it is done, I shall read it all.
Good so far can't wait to continue reading it.
26 chapters
203,000 words
Damn you. I have a paper I'm supposed to be writing
26 chapters.
Over 200 000 words.
Its 2:08 at night.
God curse you...
Loved the first chapter, can't wait to read chapter 2!
I love it so far and the author's note just pulled it all together insuring that i will enjoy this story and so far i give it a 9.9/10 but by the end I bet it will be 10/10.
That escalated quickly.
26 Chapters...
1:34 in the morning.
Just finished first chapter.
Damn you.
*presses next chapter button*
I say, You must be one of my FAVORITE writers! There is only you and one other writer whose stories I can read over and over and over! LOVE IT!!
i for love this and so glad your back
4540121Welcome to your new life of sleepless nights!
This was great! I need more! but I cant right now because I am tired
I ᒪOᐯEᗪ TᕼIᔕ
ᑕᗩᑎ'T ᗯᗩIT TO ᖇEᗩᗪ ᑎE᙭T ᑕᕼᗩᑭTEᖇ!
Congratulations!
You just earned yourself a like, favorite, follow, and a pissed off person!
Ok. WHY am I pissed off? I'M A BIG APPLEDASH FAN!!! Well, you still got the like, favorite, and follow!
NOW I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
*SLAMS THE NET CHAPTER BUTTON AS HARD AS I CAN*