Rainbow Dash and Applejack realize their romantic feelings for each other, and the hardships that they will include. *APPLEDASH SHIPPING*
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(Joke) Alt. Title: The Pink Jack: Flying Bucks With Me
8,000 words?!?! Must... begin... reading...
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GOD DAMNIT AJ, buck up and mother trucking take Rainbow back! I demand that this story recive a happy ending!
I want my D'aw levels to excede maximum safty levels it will be so happy!
Oh, by the way, increadible chapter. Love the story, love the (somewhat) refraine from basing it (their relationship) on sex. Bravo, my friend, bravo.
Gah! I kinda want to punch AJ. She's being so dumb. I know she's purposefully blinding herself, but its annoying that she's taking her ganny's advice so literally. AJ lied (about not feeling guilty when she snubbed Dash's displays of affection in public) when she was getting the advice, so its not even accurate in the first place. Plus, its mean of her to lead Caramel on in some misguided attempt to follow what she thinks her society's "norms" are. Like Dash said at some point or other, no one else in town gave a crap about the whole Lyra/Bonbon thing, right? AJ's screwing stuff up because she's scared of something that probably wouldn't even happen even if she did come out.
All I gotta say is nice work. Hopefully things get worked out before too many people - er - ponies are hurt. If this drags on too long I don't know why Dash would go back to AJ. I mean, she's purposefully hurting her, even if it is only to try and quell her own confusion. Someone who loves you shouldn't do that. So, anywho, nice work, and I look forward to reading about whatever you come up with next
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! MORE!
1950789 Honestly, I try to make scenarios in my stories as realistic as I possibly can. For example, just because no ponies explicitly talked to Lyra and Bon Bon about their PDA, doesn't mean no ponies were sitting back and judging them. I have a gay friend and it happens to him all the time. He went through the same thing Applejack is going through in this story right now. It sucks because he's a legitimately cool guy, and doesn't deserve for people to mess with him the way they do.
1949964 You'll just have to seeeee!
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That makes sense. I have a gay uncle and he didn't come out until he was thirty - he was like a completely new person afterward, like her could suddenly be himself properly, and he was a lot more fun to be around. It just seems that Applejack is in the tough in between phase and so is making a bigger deal about it than she maybe needs to. People are always going to be silently judging others. When it comes to the things you want, you have to decide at some point whether you're going to let others rule your life or take charge on your own. Which is what she's going to learn, I'm guessing. Anywho, thanks for replying, and I hope your friend is doing alright
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GAH, all the teasing! It needs a happy ending at least, right?
...Right?
OMG the feels maan so many feels....i am so hooked on this story.
Wow, I'm interested in how the two of them come (ha) back together and what-not. The feels, they burn my soul! I wish I could give Dashie a hug right now...
Why does applejack have to be this way!!!!!!
Why... Why are you doing this to my feelings? You can't just break my heart with some cold-hearted bastardness in the beginning, follow up with completely destroying my perfectly balanced hormones with a sex scene, then have AJ completely screw Rainbow Dash over again! Seriously, you'd have to be a glutton for punishment to keep reading! *sighs, presses next chapter button*.
noooooooooooooooooooo just why it hurts my feelings why just why
I do believe this was inspired by A Taste of an Apple by Feeling-Grand.