I suck at words, however, it is going great so far. And it's nice that the focus isn't sex, really adds more meaning to the story.

As what other people would say, can't wait for the next chapter!

It might be best to space the different paragraphs. All I see is one block of text of which I have no interest in reading.

Thumbs up, (insert kind words of encouragement here), and keep at it. I'm glad to see a story about a couple, rather than something ment for people to beat off to.

1870963 Sorry, to hear (read) that. But I format my stories like actual books.

1872838 Absolutely. That has been my goal from the beginning.

1900169
Bueno...
It is really refreshing to have a story like this.

Pretty much what Jackie said. 
Another nice chapter, and awaiting an update! 

It's kinda of sad to see a lack of tolerance in Ponyville,but enough commenting it is time to cotinue reading.

My gosh, I could easily see this site becoming a ground war for gay marriage and all that kind of stuff. It's kind of nice to see real world problems reflected in stories like this. I can't wait to read more of this!

Not my favourite story/genre, but adequately written, and a good monitoring of the romance escalation. Ill definitely read the whole thing. Also,
Given the clown demons a like. *click*

Bah-dah-bum-bum-bum, Ah'm lovin' it!

Kailasan hung a final hoodie in his closet, eagerly whipping around and running across the room. Leaping onto his bed he snatched up his tablet.
"Finally."
He booted it up and opened chapter four of his second favorite FiMFic ever.

wow out all the appledash stories i've read this is the best thats the truth you'r good

Nice work here. Was it a deliberate choice to have the bakers be homophobic?