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Point out any errors. This version might be unedited. I'll edit this comment once it is.
I just wanted to get into the proper story-post times when it was posted.
Anyways, 2nd attempt at 2nd person. First at Anthro. Enjoy!
came for the picture, stayed for the story.
good job.
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Glad you enjoyed!
well, it had the best of all, altho the eye colour im always alittle iffy with but thats it and im not gonna let it ruin a good story.
First Error Spotted.... two likes. Get rid of one of them...
and looking for more....
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There is plenty of slang terms in this fic...
Anyways good story.....
Hmmm... will read again soon.....
Well this'll be featured most likely.. Lol
Niiiiiice.

Dat author's note:


Not bad, not bad at all, have a stache or two

Dat cover picture
This story was really good though :3
Will read later.
I am not going to clop to it however.
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Well written
inspired by a damn good clopfic? cover art by foxinshadow (i recongnized it at once).
You may proceed
1803518Liar.
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You obviously don't know me that well.
The story itself was fairly good.
HOWEVER!
If I can say one thing that needs absolute changing, it is that you should add a bunch more detail to the orgasm scene. A simple "cum and done" sentence like that is kind of a boner killer.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Love You Like A Dumb Song
very very good!
....
very GOOD!
아주좋아!
Daynum!!!! Awesome story!!
I doubt he's trying to kiss his own stomach :p
Good story bro, tell it again!
There should not be any highercase letters after the ";".
However I did like this, and I hope that you will both do a sequal and add some more sex details regarding the 'end'.
Well, never read a VS shipping story that ships her with an OC or self-insert... Dis gon b gud
Gewd... Very gewd... But, hey... Is VS in anthro form or something?
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Thanks for pointing out those errors. Fixed em.
Side note to everyone else: Featured. Thanks so much! I'm so happy.
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Yeah, she is. Sorry if it didn't catch on quite well. But, she is.
1803549
Also, thank you for commenting on my story. A Core Of An Apple was quite good, besides all the errors. I just couldn't help myself when this came to mind. I also had Vinyl Scratch's anthro form as my background for quite a while ever since I visited your page. God by damned if I don't declare that it's hot myself.
1804065 Oh, sorry didn't notice you had mentioned her as anthro in the description. But, epic story bro!



Have some moustaches and a brohoof!
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Thanks! I enjoy you reading it. I feel so happy right now.
1804088 Hehe! 'Course! Your story isn't one of my top favorites just yet, but if you keep stories like this up, I might just have to!
1802939 You too?
1804102
If Fox's rates weren't so damn high, I'd purchase some art off him. God damn it!
will read later, THIS I SWEAR!!
I don't ike clop, but I wanted to know why this was featured.
I read all the way the the part where he starts thinking about sex. and then stopped.
It was good up to that point, I'll say that much.
I certainly wouldn't mind reading a non-sexual story about this kind of relationship.
Erm, I'd say good job... But I still don't approve of clop. anyway bye.
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It's fine to disapprove of clop. No worries. It's why I left it at the end.
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Well yeah, "2nd person fic" seems to be another thing on the list of "instant feature box" stories.
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If it's wrote up well, of course!
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Not exactly a requirement. I've seen some pretty "meh" 2nd-person fics get featured immediately.
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Well, shoot me twice and call me a liar if my first 2nd person didn't get featured.
No, but, thanks for the read!
Son, I am disappoint.
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No.
1804446 Yes.
1802773 What's wrong with being a demon it's fun.
1802964 Her eyes' iris are magenta, you can see them in A Royal Canterlot Wedding part 2.
You...
You've accomplished something no one else has ever done.
YOU have made me read an anthro/humanised pony story!
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Cerise! Not Magenta, Cerise!
Taken directly from the wiki.
I make a habit of staying away from anthro fics.... because, you know... not pony... but I am so very tempted right now... and I will probably read it later...
Mkay... I am very very confused here... I'm a few paragraphs in, and I can't help but notice that you are referring to Vinyl as a pony... with hands, a mane, etc...
I'm not sure exactly, but I don't think that's how these things work...I mean... one cannot be a pony... if one has hands... I think I may need to stop there though... because if I actually need to think about things like this, my brain will explode long before I get through 5k words.