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My editor believe I'm an asshole. I believe he's too opinionated because he's use to clop that's 'erotica'.
Anyways, this is a One Shot-Dark Universe. Completely alternate for the fact that King Sombra probably wouldn't have did this to his subjects. So, please, constructive criticism and don't let your morals get in the way of the actual writing.
See you soon. Thanks.
Note to the mods:
Speed yo' shit up!
Just kidding. Thanks for approving it. I know how busy you guys must be.
~~ Shadowflash.
1593620
Can't help but think of THIS while reading the story XD
1603019
My sides, dude (Dudette?) Goddamn Boondocks!
1593620
Also, glad to see it finally got published dude! And great work on the story itself. I know I've said it before but you've got this really distinctive writing style that I'm a huge fan of. And this story has that great style in spades! I love it.
Can't wait to see more work from you in the future, Flash.
BTW. If you're interested I just wrote a little piece for my story that has Shadowflash in it? I can send it to you on Google Docs so you can tell me what you think and see if I do him any justice :-p
Me Gusta.
1593620 If you want another editor for fics like these, I'm pretty much used to them by now, and I can almost always comment on things objectively without bias. I've been writing fiction as an amateur for over 10 years and I've helped several of my friends along with constructive criticism and commentary. I also did quite a bit of editing/commentary work for Cosmonaut on a lot of more "intense" clopfics, so...I'm used to doing this sort of thing if you should ever want my help.
And the Crystal Clop begins.
1603083
I'm guessing you plan on joining the Crystal Shenanigans as well?
1603130 Lol, maybe.
1603143
Well considering your previous writings, I don't doubt whatever it'd be would be enjoyable
1603146 Yeah... but I'm not in the right mood. I still need to, you know... get into the cloppy mentality, and I'm just stuck on serious stuff at the moment.
I have a fetish for all of it except abuse so yeah I have a fetish for rape and I also have a slave fetish. I now have a fetish for almost everything.........
1603159
I know how that is. Especially when trying to write comedy after coming off a Serious story.
1603159 Meh. Might as well be one of the first.
1603053 Well, I love my editor. I just find that he does get opinionated over small things sometimes. He feels that I should've wrote an erotica, and doubted my abilities to even obtain likes on this story.
But, I've always considered use of two editors. It seems that I've been 'downing' my description in stories that progress longer than 4 chapters.
So, PM me and we'll talk.
1603032 I'd enjoy reading that piece.
1603019 I remember this.
Interesting. FiMFic really needs a Sombra tag
1606133 Maybe a series of Clops with Sombra. I'll see what I want to do.
Has anypony noticed we know nothing of Sombra? He said, what, 3 words the entire episode?
1606322 "Mmmm... Crystals...."
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
What scares me is that I was thinking about Sombra raping his slaves before I even saw this
considering that he seems to be the only pure evil character in the show so far, this seems more plausible than ya think
1606643 I know, right?
wow sombra puts discord to shame not that I dislike discord he's awesome. and I'm not a fan of rape but I'l read anything as long as it's not foalcon. shudders to self.
1607012 Ewwww, foalcon. More like donotreadthiscon.
1607023 finally someone agrees with me my morals and I find that sick and wrong the thought of manipulating fillies and colts for your sexual desires is fucked up even IRL it is sick and for guys IRL it is hard cause you always get accused of said things
1607128 Well, welcome to the awful world called Earth. >.<
Lots of messed up people.
1607163 yeah
I see what you did there
1606643
He is also the only enemy who they actually, completely destroyed.
1606214 Any chance on him seducing some Male Ponies?
Please say yes
1608276 Maybe. >.>
1610478 http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/87345#comment/500989
IT'S A SOMBRA FIC! DUCK AND COVER!
1622623 WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
MORE PONY SOMBRA!
1622630 OH BOY
1622634
Homosexual clop inbound?!
FUCK YES.
1622646 We need a Discord/Sombra/Spike three-way.
1622690 With Chrysalis? Fourway.
1622696 But then it wouldn't be homosexual.
1622714 Morph into a futa?
1622720 NO
FUTA-CHRYSALIS...
GOD...
1622741
1622750 Seriously, that story sequel... god, the view whorring was just emanating from it.
1622764
It was... Jesus Christo
1622769 AH DON'T SPEAK YOUR CRAZY FRENCH LANGUAGE!
1622771
Sorry! D:
:3
Anyways, since we're talking...
How are ye?
1622775 Just fine, thanks for asking!
Currently suffering nail-biting anxiety over my new fic which is still waiting to be approved.
1593620 i tend to agree with your editor.....you write very well, and i would like to see what becomes of Sugarmoon
1625055
Unfortunately for the both of you; I can't draw out another fic. Two in-progress is enough at the moment, and I feel that if I have three in-progress, I'd just stress out more about it.
But, another one of these stories (excluding the rape) is coming out soon; by me. So, watch out for it.
"Eve, bring in a slave. Make sure it's a mare, and the mare has a husband. Or better; a family."
Sombra thinking: "TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLO"