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"Sometimes the world doesn't need another hero... Sometimes what it needs is a monster." - Count Dracula

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Aww yeah.

Here we go!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Wow, this Andrew guy takes hints like a fucking boulder. Though I do like the story! ^_^

You could probably lose the Lightning Dust tag. She's not in there enough to make much of a need of it anyway.

All in all... Hot and awesome.

May I request Fluttershy next? You've a nack for anthro clop.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I like the Avante cover art :3

hee hee hee. We're watching you.


Oh great. I'm being followed by a plague. (Haha)

~Skeeter The Plagued

What is this? Spike/LD? What?

Edit: that was disappointing. No best pony and fjsndgfdnh whatever man.

Read this now I have to read others.

Dash said, that if he were lucky, she will not have problems. Those that means that later on you might make a sequel were they make a treasome with AJ?

By the way, what was that about charm princess Luna? Did you will explain that in another story ?

Comment posted by CobaltDrake deleted May 15th, 2013

To answer both your questions, those two things were hints for future stories.

Andrew is modeled somewhat after myself. I'll admit I was pretty dense when I was 18.

Where's the cover from? Google?

Comment posted by Lighting Ace deleted May 15th, 2013

It was in my collection...but here you go Corrupted Harmony

I laughed, I cried, (Not really) And I other things... But all in all, I smiled with joy throughout the entire thing. Great story, and I think you have inspired us all. (Maybe)
Wait a minute... Something here is missing... Seems as if my favorite russian follower is on vacation... Thank gods...

anthro pls go

Don't forget Pinkie Pie

Niiiiiice man :D

:trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:
*smashes a china set*

I ate some fries 3/4's into the story...a beautiful moment was given to me:pinkiesad2:

I usually don't like NSFW but this is by far the best fanfiction I've ever read.

at the end there, he should say "I couldn't care less" not "i could care less" just sayin.:derpytongue2:

Every time a new character speaks you should make a new paragraph... Every time.

Even trying to read through your dialogue is a chore and extremely confusing because of the mixed up dialogues.

This is a very simple change that improves the readability of a story tenfold.

Great story but spike needs to grow up. Like he never pictured himself fucking Rainbow Dash. :facehoof:

how the hell dose Spike cant think of Dash as sexy

2583599, 2583601
He practically grew up with the Mane Six, so he thinks of them as Sisters. Except Rarity, he has always seen her as a love interest. Also I think he would just be immature no matter how old he got, it just strikes me as his kind of personality. :moustache:

Yeah good point, I'm such an ass hole. :trixieshiftright:

2583654 fair enough but he dose have his moments:eeyup:

Well, can't say that I didn't hate it, nor did I like it. Loved it. Amazing job.

Comment posted by sniper alchemist deleted May 16th, 2013

good story :twilightsmile::twilightsmile: i congratulate your work:twilightsmile::twilightsmile: and im not even a fan of these storys

well it destroyed what was left off sanity :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by sniper alchemist deleted May 16th, 2013

why does anthro almost all the time end with sex?

Comment posted by Fourpony deleted May 16th, 2013

Dayum, this story is sexy!

And also, Rainbow was quite *puts shades on* The DASHING!
YEEEAAAAAA- shut up.

seriously, this story was hot! Gotta read some of your fics! :)


I had that corrected in the first draft I received. Dammit, Cobalt, you're making me look bad! :raritydespair:

I have a feeling I'll regret reading this, but, here we go! Diving in headfirst!


*Hears a crack*

NOOOO-Hey, the bottom of the pool's got a crack in it, now! Get back here and pay for that! :twilightangry2:

Rainbow Dash is a Wonderbolt

Shadowbolt outfit in cover


Okay, you might want to work on your sentence structure a bit. However, so far, pretty good!

I actually want a sequel of these two together :twilightsmile:

Okay... So an 18 year old human male ends up in Equestria, and, against all social odds and norms of the current day, he's a virgin, and he ends up fucking Rainbow Dash, who also, despite everything you'd expect (I'd expect her to be an extremely tomboyish slut), is a virgin. Four years later, they accidentally meet up in a club, go back to the human's place, and fuck an endless number of times, and then they laugh at Spike, the human's roommate when he comes back, for the awkward situation.

All in all? I came for the cover, and I came again for the plot.


>mfw reading your comment :rainbowlaugh:

2587234 I do not know what mfw stands for.

I'm sorry! :raritycry: It's not your fault.

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