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Brony2893


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Rarity moves to Canterlot to pursue more clients for her business, leaving Sweetie Belle in charge of Carousel Boutique. When Rarity arrives, she is generously offered a stay at Canterlot Castle free of charge, courtesy of Princess Celestia. Is the keeper of the sun simply being generous to one of the Elements, or does she have an ulterior motive for the marshmallow unicorn?



Rated teen for language and suggestive themes.
Edited by Darastrix.
Pre-read by Azu.
Title idea provided by Inferno demon Dash.
Cover image made by Sinrar.

Chapters (1)
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Comment posted by Brony2893 deleted Dec 20th, 2012

Yep, it's a Rarilestia ship-fic//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
In the back of my mind, I've always wanted to do this shipping, but it was the motivational teasing by my editor that really got my creative juices flowing. Surprisingly, there's only one other Rarilestia ship-fic I could find on the internet, and that was the final nail in the coffin per-say. I wanted to have something "new" and as original as possible with this one:moustache:

I love comments, be them good or bad. Any and all are welcomei.imgur.com/eAjva.png

Don't forget to rate and favorite if you liked iti.imgur.com/OzWNB.png

Once again, a big thank you to Azu, Darastrix, and Sinrar for their helpi.imgur.com/CGBhB.png
And yes, you too, Inferno demon Dash:twilightsmile:

An unique combination. Let us see if you can pull it off.

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Just wait till you see my next story:raritywink:
Thans for the favorite, btw:yay:

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You know what's rare? The elusive Snowflake(Roid Rage) X anything ship. I want to see someone write that.

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I debated Rarluna... but even my overactive imagination coudln't really get it to work without really forcing it.:applejackunsure:

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Roid Rage shipping?
Challenge accepted:moustache:

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Sweet, PM me if you need any help.

I came cross the cove art a few days ago so I have been wondering when it will be posted. This is in my read it later pile.

Well I've read it... yep certainly an off the wall paring that we don't see too often. Can't say much right now but I do look forward to seeing how this will play out... and how you will characterize Celestia.

Azu

and so it begins. Though for some reason I see these 2 being quite possible.

Your welcome brother, seriously loved everything about it and the title Lady Rairty is impressive though I'm not a fan of Rarity herself and I really dislike Twilight/Rainbow Dash pairings but as long as they are seriously not the main focus then I can deal...for once.:rainbowlaugh:

I'm sorry, was that the dark, whispered voice of Avarice: Element of Wealth, dark half of Rarity and one of six members of the Elements of Disharmony I spotted? If so....:yay::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::ajsmug:

If not then maybe next time:twilightsheepish:

To deny a Goddess, I would to see that happen to Luna or Celestia from a mortal pony one day:rainbowlaugh: They would DIE!!!

My second favorite pairing ever: SpikeBelle!!!!:yay::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

And can't wait to see Derpy Hooves, even if it is only minor in this story:moustache:

Luna is best Princess/Goddess:pinkiesmile:

This is going to be good....wonder what other pairings you'll have in this, even if they are only minor.:twilightsmile:

1835364 NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted to do a Snowflake/Derpy, Rainbow Dash or even Spitfire one-shot, but you stole my chance, MAY THE GODS CURSE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!





Nah, I'm just playing, impressive ideas though, I like them:derpytongue2:

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I never said Derpy would be in this:rainbowhuh:

Rarity/Celestia fic... don't see many of those haha. I like this though... I'll keep an eye on it :twilightsmile:

And reading this I am both intrigued and annoyed. I want to see where this goes and I'm annoyed that your work feels so natural where mine just comes across as forced... Any tips you can divulge?

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Oh, well first off, thanks for the compliment:twilightsmile:

As for the rushed feeling a lot of people just like you have? It is not an easy thing to fix, if you read my first fic I ever posted (Please don't:fluttercry:) You'll see it is utter crap compared to my newer stuff. When I'm doing dialogue or a scene I stop literally every couple line and think to myself: "What would real people's ponies reactions be? Would they really be so quick to go about things? How might I add details to this part? How can I refine the wording so everything is smoother?"

tl;dr If the cider episode with AJ and the Flim Flam brothers had a moral, it was quality before quantity:moustache:

I'm sure I mucked up what I was really trying to say somewhere along the way:twilightblush:
But the point is to take your time:raritywink: Thomas Edison didn't get anywhere rushing things, it took him 2000 tries to get it right:moustache:
I really love the hell out of both your SpikeShy fics and I'd love to help you out if you want it. I could pre-read for you if you like?:scootangel:

1919584 Actually would you mind terribly going over the first few chapters of Spike' s out of his Depth. The story I want is there but rereading it it feels almost mechanical, any suggested improvements are welcome, I may send you the fourth (unreleased) chapter to preread if I am not happy with it. Thanks in advance!

You should update this soon.:pinkiecrazy:

Oh. Oh, this is new. This is going straight into my brain.

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And that's a good thing, right?:applejackunsure:

2271301 Pfffft No! :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: Yes, but shhhh.... I don't want people thinking I like new stuff. Still gotta rage about the layout change.

I wonder about Sweetie Belle and Spike though, those two have gotten awful close since my sister took over the business... Not that Rarity had anything wrong with that. In fact, Spike had grown into an admittedly handsome young man; his eyes were now level with most ponies. … and he has the cutest little wings.

As long as this doesn't continue, I'll have no issue with, and genuinely enjoy, reading this fic all the way through~.

Did see at least one error in there:

caught site of the

*sight

May be more but speed reads don't do well for catching shit :rainbowlaugh:

This shall definitely be interesting, though.

Ok. following this for now. I really want to know how it continues before I make any in depth judgements.

1835364>>1835629 I haven't read this one yet, but I will do later. (Got an aircraft instruments class to go to!) Anyway, a Snowflake/roid Rage shipping? Don;t see it much, but FanaticGeekBrony's Mane six shipping stories have Snowflake x Fluttershy in them!

MY LIFE FOR AIUR I MEAN CHANGELING HIVE I MEAN THE SUN


Rarity,You are Best pony/changeling(Three sister)/protoss

I like keep you that way

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it joke cause Rarity use gems in work all the time like Protoss

It there was fanfic name for the Three sister,where in rarity was changeling

Iiiiiiiiiinteresting. More please. :twilightsmile:

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