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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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The last time she tried to offer Fluttershy's brother a small job to get him back on his hooves, Rarity was rewarded with a trashed boutique and a dreadful cleaning bill for her cat. For most ponies, an encounter like that would lead them to tossing out Zephyr Breeze the instant he tried to come back for another shot.

However, due to his recently-acquired confidence, as well as his sister's approval of his new behavior, Rarity hesitantly decided to give him a second chance after he was fired from his most recent hairdressing job. After all, one of the most important foundations of friendship is forgiveness; plus, the fashionista was meaning to look for a stylist for an upcoming fashion show she was running.

However, a small snag may be enough to put both Rarity and Zephyr Breeze through a rather awkward loop. Since the mare can't exactly get a fair reference from Zephyr's previous employer, she would have to see his skills by example. But since all of her wigs were gone, that meant there was only way she could know how good of a hairdresser he was: By having him cut somepony's mane.

And Rarity was the only pony around.


[Note: This story is my entry for the Make Rarity Not Garbage contest, hosted by the Barcast group.

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Comments ( 17 )

Huh...
I'm kind of surprised I haven't run into anything that ships Rarity and Zephyr outside of this fic yet...

And while I won't read it (not because I think it'll be bad, but because I ship Sparity THAT hard), I'll admit I don't automatically have the same dislike for RariBreeze that I do for BreezeDash

Now this shipping actually makes sense. A fashionist and a hairstylist, certainly a lot better than most of those romance stories that put two characters that have NOTHING in common.

Rarity + Zephyr... dating..... that be like........
Tirek opening a dance class. (i leave it with that)

Awesome premise.

I don't blame zephyr for having that reaction towards spoiled. I probebly would have done the same.

Please continue this :)

Great.

Vclaw doing straight ships now?

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Now? Did you forget the lovely romance I wrote between Granny Smith and her special somepony?

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I just expected this story to be a rule63 m/m story

I'm actually writing something going towards this ship, so it was interesting seeing your take on this. It's nice seeing Rarity and Zephyr interact, and I was fond of the outcome. It helps that everything was written well grammatically and structurally. I favorite this story and I think I'm going to have to follow you.

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Not to mention both struggle with self-doubt.

Well, to be fair to Zephyr, Discord, Starlight, and even Trixie did worse things than he, so a harder struggle was simply justified.

Weird how this ship is so rare. It seems a natural fit, excepting Zephyr's strange attraction to Rainbow Dash.

This is a pretty good story. An excellent idea, and good execution.

Under normal circumstances, I'd stop here; I usually don't offer corrections to completed stories. However, there are two misspellings in the story that stick out. If you wish, I can point them out in a PM.

That ending :rainbowlaugh: , I troll people the exact same way!

this is less making Rarity not trash and more make Zepher not trash which in my opinion is more impressive

Cute, short, sweet! Calm atmosphere, everything is in-character. It's all just so cozy and fluffy. I love it.

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Given how well he handled that tango.... :raritywink:

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