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Twilight and Applejack have just discovered their feelings for each other, and all is well until their budding romance is interrupted by an urgent missive from Princess Celestia. Now, Twilight finds herself at a crossroads. Will she leave Ponyville and achieve all that she once desired, or will she decide that she has all she needs on an apple farm in Ponyville?

Meanwhile, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are faced with their own choices. Are they just friends, or could they be something more?

This is the sequel to Three's A Crowd. Reading that story isn't required, but it'll give you some additional background.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 115 )

Oh sweet continuation. This should be good.

:ajsmug::heart::twilightsmile: = Nice love story
:rainbowwild::heart::yay: = Daaaaaw
Those are excellent shipping, and very well written.

Usually I go for more AJ and RD shipping. But I really like this! Epic writing.
:ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2::yay::twilightsmile:

This looks very promising.

a twijack story is always what im looking for :twilightblush::ajsmug: and im happy to see this one continue! i believe you have improved too! looking forward to more! never enough twijack anywhere

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Thanks! It's always nice to see best pony and second-best pony shipped together. I feel like I've improved too, and I hope I keep getting better as this story progresses. :twilightsmile:

I read the description, and I'm still three chapters away from being done with Three's A Crowd. I'm not sure if I should be rejoicing that there's going to be more or angry that I just spoiled the ending of TaC for myself. I'll go with both. :twilightangry2: :pinkiehappy:

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Ack! Uh, you didn't see any... Hey, is that a squirrel?

Sorry to have spoiled things. :applejackunsure: Hope you still enjoy the rest of TaC!

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Don't worry; I enjoyed the rest of it, it didn't spoil that much anyways, that squirrel was my long lost brother's pet named George who became my wacky animal sidekick as we set off to search for his owner in a family-drama-comedy adventure, and now I have something else to read tomorrow.

found a minor punctuation error. "Fluttershy lifted her wing slightly, jostling her saddlebags and drawing Rainbow's attention to them. "I was just feeding the bunnies down by the Everfree Forest."
The first " has to go^^ Thats all^^

I can kinda understand how Fluttershy's feeling.... Let's just say that I've been through something similar... Good thing she has Dash there for her. Nothing like a good friend at your side during times like that

so you actually made a sequel bravo bravo

Ah, my daily dose of Twi/AJ fluff, how I've missed you! :yay:

Brilliant to see a sequel to what is easily one of the finest TwiJack fics out there. :twilightsmile:

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Aww, you're too kind. :twilightblush: I'm glad you enjoyed TaC. Hopefully you enjoy this story, too.

1916758 It's not flattery if it's true. :twilightsmile:

And I have little doubt that I will. :pinkiehappy:

Here it is! :pinkiehappy: Personally, I had a blast writing this chapter, especially the FlutterDash part. Hopefully you guys like it, too. Either way, look for next chapter sometime next weekend (hopefully not as late as this one :twilightsheepish:).

i sense forboding with that letter

Wait....
this has TwiJack AND FlutterDash in it? Those are my two favorite ships! :yay::twilightsmile::ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2:

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Hopefully I do them justice, then. :pinkiehappy:

I love this flutterdash relationship. I can't wait to see more:yay::heart::rainbowwild:

Oh boy.... It's 'the' letter. :pinkiegasp:

Celestia's timing couldn't be much worse, could it? :facehoof: Dropping a H-bomb on a fledgling relationship? This is gonna be a doozy. :twilightoops:

no not THE LETTER :raritydespair::raritycry::pinkiegasp:

look for next chapter sometime next weekend (hopefully not as late as this one :twilightsheepish:).

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You'd better hurry, I just can't wait for the following.
To be forgiven, you'll have to publish the 4th chapter earlier :scootangel:

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The last days of winter break were busier than anticipated haha. Now that I'm back in college, I'll have plenty of time to not be late with stuff. :derpyderp2:

I know what you must all be thinking. I promise, there's another chapter coming either tomorrow or Wednesday (not even counting this weekend's planned chapter). I just felt that this segment had to be set apart, so you'll be getting two half-chapters instead of one arbitrary grouping of two chapters together. Sorry for being so late. :pinkiesad2: Hope you enjoy! :twilightsmile:

I know what you must all be thinking. I promise, there's another chapter coming either tomorrow or Wednesday (not even counting this weekend's planned chapter).

Good to know, I forgive your delay ;p
I like this TwiJack relation, but I don't understand why Twilight feels obligate to move to Canterlot ?

*once Twi had read the letter* http://www.dramabutton.com/

Oh, did I do that? :trollestia:

It certainly helps that I keep getting bursts of inspiration while writing this story, especially the FlutterDash. That wasn't part of TaC's initial plan, so I didn't have a full idea of how it would develop starting out. That's made it an absolute blast to write. I still love the direction I'm taking TwiJack in, even if it seems grim right now. :raritydespair:

It gets better, I swear. :unsuresweetie: Don't look at me like that! It's true! :scootangel:

Still more to come this weekend. :twilightsmile:

Twilight's going about this all wrong. She's defeating herself by over thinking things.

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It's the exact sort of problem Twilight is least suited to deal with.

Take the job :pinkiehappy:
no dont take the job :pinkiegasp:
Oh man :applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

Awesome. I like this Twijack situation, I think it's very well written. :twilightsmile:
I'm also satisfied with the Flutterdash relation : it goes very slowly, they both keep the personality they have in the serie, we really believe it. Let's see where it'll bring us :pinkiehappy:

Don't do it, Twi! :raritycry:

Damn, my beloved TwiJack with a serious wrench in the works. :twilightoops:

New chapter's coming tomorrow. Since it's MLK Jr. Day, I'm still counting that as the weekend. The reason its late is because it is really long! I mean, long by my standards, but that means it's almost 5,000 words! Tons of plot development at work. I'm sure you all will love it. (Or some of you. Hopefully. Please. :fluttershysad:)

Love the Flutter/Dash fluff but the Twi/Jack situation's got me worried. It'd be sad to see them start drifting before anything really has a chance to start.

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I know! Let's hope Luna and Celestia have some good advice for Twilight.

My two favorite pairings in one story? Yes please.

This is a good premise. If Applejack were to end up with Twilight (or Rarity or Rainbow Dash) their ultimate goals would clash. I'm curious to see what Twilight will pick, or if she'll find some way to have her cake and eat it too.

Well, it's getting better and better.
TwiJack has a good story with a huge problem in their relation, Twilight has to choose between AJ and her duty :twilightangry2:
And Flutterdash, now, completly steals the show (that's not a bad thing:yay:). They have a really close relation, and they start to realize that (blush, snuggle, even a wingboner:rainbowwild:).
We have a romantic dilemn with TwiJack and a cute growing love with FlutterDash. Congratulation dude, that story IS awesome :rainbowkiss:

one way or another i hope twi stays with applejack, i just love them two! :heart: this is really good so far, and i cant wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

There probably won't be a new chapter this week, sadly. :pinkiesad2: I'm flying home to surprise my dad on his 50th birthday, so I'll make sure to polish up next week's chapter extra well for y'all. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Barnabi deleted Jan 29th, 2013
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