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Just another meeting? Just another friend? Worlds apart brought together and tested by time. Will fate shine on them or will they fade in the foggy streets of Cloudsdale. My second story. Will be a series. A Flutterdash story.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 21 )

Looks promising. Please continue as its already interesting.

Awesome! When the next chapter comes out :rainbowkiss:?

An interesting start! Can't wait to see more :rainbowkiss:

A sad beginning. I look forward to the next chapter.

2173347 The second chapter will be done shortly. The third will take a little more time. Thanks for the comments all :yay:

That was a great meeting between the two of them. I like that Rainbow has more of a working pony background, though the fact that she's being picked on because of it wasn't cool. Of course, it just showed off how kind Fluttershy is.

I can't wait for Rainbow to find out that Fluttershy's father was a Wonderbolt, and I imagine it'll be the bus driver who'll spill the beans as Fluttershy is leaving the bus.

Really good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. :yay:

A very promising start. :yay:
I´m eagerly waiting for more.

Aww.. that was very nice of Fluttershy. Poor Rainbow :fluttershysad:

Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Oh my gosh this is so cute!!! I love it! :heart: :raritystarry: please upload again soon! :pinkiehappy:

So far so cute. But yeah I also like how you made Fluttershy a well-to-do pony (since that's my headcanon as well), but it seems Fluttershy won't have to worry about being a 'Central Pegasus' for long, since they'll be moving out (I'm assuming Equestria's govt has methods of supporting the families of fallen soldiers/Wonderbolts). So yeah looking forward to seeing where we go from here,

I was worried how Rainbow would react when she found out where Fluttershy was from, and her reaction was understandable. Look forward to the next chapter to see their friendship grow stronger.

I kind of saw it coming that she wouldn't take it well. Can't wait for more! :yay:

Aw, how nice of Fluttershy. Poor Rainbow had it tough. :fluttershysad:

Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

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Hm, but after this what i'm understanding, rainbow is not reacting like this because fs is a central-pony, but because she thought that fs was sorry for here :rainbowhuh:?

Anyway, great Chapter, like always :twilightsheepish:!

D'aawww :heart:! Very great Chapter :raritywink:!

Need more :flutterrage: 10 weeks since the last update? I am disappoint

Cute alternative sorta Flutterdash story.

I just hope you haven't disapeared and will continue this wonderful tale. :fluttershysad::rainbowderp:

Are you alive? Seriously! MOAR:flutterrage:

Wow, I forgot this one existed, it has been a while.

It certainly has been a long time but you're still going along with this story quite well. :twilightsheepish:

"Shut up!! Get me the damn doctor!" Fluttershy yelled in frustrated rage as she held Rainbow's head with her hooves.

Wow. Fluttershy could swear?

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