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Star Plasma

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snowraider8
snowraider8 #2 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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i loled at the part with the gaurds

Twifight Sparkill
Twifight Sparkill #3 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Hello! My goodness Star, you've been QUITE NAUGHTY I SEE.

I very much enjoyed this for its subtlety - as in a complete lack thereof!

I'm more than a little aroused, and this is officially now part of my headcanon.

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Love_and_Tolerate
Love_and_Tolerate #5 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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The guard part was hilarious!

I also loved the ending. :scootangel:

Crimson ONayl
Crimson ONayl #6 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Haha, witty comments still elude me at this time, so have a Pinkie :pinkiehappy:

Steel Resolve
Steel Resolve #8 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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It's an interesting concept, but you need to work on characterization. I did not notice any real problems with grammar or punctuation. I understand its comedy, but that does not have to come at the expense of the characters.

Biker_Dash
Biker_Dash #10 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Wow... I wanna taste of that cupcake too!

ReaperofSouls42
ReaperofSouls42 #12 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Ah damn, That was some funny cloppy goodness. Not bad at all. The only thing i didn't like was the food play. I liked it.:heart::heart::pinkiecrazy:

Star Plasma
Star Plasma #13 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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1638321 Thanks, Reaper. It means a lot coming from a seasoned clopper like you!:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

ReaperofSouls42
ReaperofSouls42 #14 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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1638332 Lol you're welcome my friend. one more thing, if you make more you might want to not user vagina and use like marehood and whatnot lol:pinkiehappy:

Twystron500
Twystron500 #15 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Sexy enough for me. Good job!

Andy-025
Andy-025 #17 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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Damn you! you're making me favriote a clop fic

Star Plasma
Star Plasma #18 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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1638388 WOOHOO! Is that a first for you?

Westphalian_Musketeer
Westphalian_Musketeer #25 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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The moment Twilight and Pinkie started the food-play, my mind instantly went to this.
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It was... a buzz-kill for sure, but that just made it all the more hilarious.
1638001 This guy is right, you could have had Twilight try to be a little more analytic. Though I think it was a hilarious idea having the royal guards being such hound-dogs.

QuakeScape
QuakeScape #27 · Nov 18th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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1638883 My reaction to this?

*Looks at left arm, which has the rocket launcher.* God Dam-! :twilightangry2: Can't a demon clop ?

Even Cacodemon made my day miserable!

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Autism Man
Autism Man #47 · Nov 19th, 2012 · · · Hardly Shy With Pinkie Pie ·
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1640736 Shall we call a truce? I require nurishment and doth not want to get spammed by your commical moving images!

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