Based off of the comic 'White Eclipse' on DeviantArt.
The reward of duty was never great for the Princess of the Night. When her efforts are continually unappreciated by her subjects, Luna is driven to seek solace alone in the Everfree Forest. There she meets a unique foal whom she takes under her wing as her protegee, despite the looming danger of her new student's inherited hatred of the Canterlot Royals that forces Luna to hide her true identity. How long can the Princess maintain the lie, and can the bond between them ever grow under its shadow?
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For a description, how about something like:
The reward of duty was never great for the Princess of the Night. When her efforts are continually unappreciated by her subjects, Luna is driven to seek solace alone in the Everfree Forest. There she meets a unique foal whom she takes under her wing as her protegee, despite the looming danger of her new student's inherited hatred of the Canterlot Royals that forces Luna to hide her true identity. How long can the Princess maintain the lie, and can the bond between them ever grow under its shadow?
986362 Thank you for the suggestion. I'll probably change that right now.
-StarslashBrony
whoa... that ending.. nice.
1046036 This was written by Plasma in his composition book. I read it while typing it. I know what you mean. I was afraid my computer would stop working due to water falling on it.
whooooooaaaaa
dat last line....
1175981 Yes. After she lost consciousness, she woke up and was blind again.
Damn dude, that letter got me
. Great work!
1234711 Thanks!
Who is Silver Crescent's descendent? I hope it's Trixie.
1284998 You will find out in the sequel.
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there's... a... SEQUEL?!?!!?
hehe... going to be.
1285051 Daww! Love that GIF. And Eeyup. Sequel soon to be released.
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when?
hopefully soon
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1301110parasprite
1301110 Because his balls haven't dropped yet.
1305752 But you're mom did just drop onto my dick... damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn that's nice.
You: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
Me: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png
1305764 This guy right here.
1305764 whoa, we got a badass over here!
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1310569 Whoa, how long did it take for you to come up with that one? If you're gonna be a smartass, first you have to be smart. Otherwise, you're just an ass.
1311530 Don't be a smart ass, asshole.
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1311616 Titdirt! Not more Tourettesguy!
1311651 Don't talk shit about Total! Um, I mean Tourette's Guy! He's is the funniest thing in the history of the universe.
Agreed?
1311530 i'm gonna love and tolerate the SHIT out of you!
1311663 A Greed.
1315090 Greed is one of the seven deadly sins. You're going to heaven!
1315112 Damn.
1315155 I know, heaven suXXX (your mom and sister with me last night hot three way)
1315188 My dad driving.
(Me, your mom, and your sister in the back)
THREEWAY ON THE FREEWAY!
Me afterwards:dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png Like A muthafuckin boss.
I noticed this in the "Want criticism" box of your group, Plasma. So, here are the mistakes I noticed. *takes breath*
"Oh, com now, you did it all alone, you should thank yourself. You'll be a great scholar."
- I believe you meant come
"Well i'm taking care of that right now! WAHAHAHAHAHA!"
- I'm
"Together, her and Celestia pushed Nightmare Moon's beam back. When the beams hit Nightmare Moon's horn, Crescent blacked out."
- Celestia and she
You could have gone into more detail over how it was Luna who raised the sun on the day Crescent was blinded.
I will however give you credit for tying up the story nicely, with any discrepancies being resolved nicely, given the fact that the story is a Nightmare Moon origin story. It is short, touching, and fits in well with the canon.
1346523 Well thanks for that! I knew I still had some errors in here! I stayed up until six o clock typing this, so my brain was kind of not functioning properly.
That.......was one of the sweetest things ever.
1359637 Thanks!
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This song fits this fic so freaking well
1575658 Is it Cosmic Love? The author said that that song fits really well. I can't really copy paste with my phone, so you wanna tell me what it is?
tears.lots of tears.