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Star Plasma

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You have been a Canterlot Royal Guard for about a year now, and your duty is to protect the Princess of the Night. You often have wonderful dreams about being together with Princess Luna, but you know that she is way out of your league and you will never be enough for her. The empty void in your life grows bigger every day, but eventually you notice that Luna seems to be spending more and more time with her favorite guard: you. Will your dream finally come true? Does Luna feel the same about you?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 46 )

Golden Bows a changeling. Calling it right now.
Interesting story, I'll hold off giving thumbs up for now to see how this progresses, but I will continue to watch this.

Star Plasma rides again!?


2801162 Twifight! It's been a long time!

Ok, you suckered me in with Luna :twilightblush: Can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

2801431 Always had a thing for Luna fics >.> I'm basically nocturnal anyways... dumb school :rainbowlaugh:

I like where this story is going.

It's actually hilarious 'cause this morning I was going to write the same story, But then I saw yours 'en I didn't care about my ideas for a very similar story.

2801456 I have actually had this typed up for a while, but I just submitted it today after making a few alterations.

2801499 There is no need to apologize, I'm just glad a brillIant author; Who I might add has incredible grammar skills, Did this story. I simply can not contain my excitement for the further progression of this story.

2801557 Thank you. All that means a lot to me.:pinkiesad2:

excellent story keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

wow this reminds me of one of my stories, hey even the same cover art hahaha, anyway sounds interesting

Calling it right now before anyone else can do it.

Based off of this fic, am I right?

You now officially have my interest. I really liked this chapter, and hope for more good ones to come :3

2801765 Uh... no. I have never heard about it haha


:| Well alrighty then.

2801874 Your avatar! It's amazing :D

2801946 Haha thanks :)
I chose well.

You have a pretty nice one too BTW:pinkiehappy:

Why in the bloody hell is the creepy guard so creepy? Is it because she knows something we don't? Probably not.
Great story so far anyway - the second person style is a tough art to master, but you do it well! :twilightsmile:

this story is really good even on the first chapter :derpytongue2::twilightsmile::moustache::yay::scootangel::rainbowdetermined2:

This I like... :D whats with the creepy guard though? Lol

Liking this, the only problem I have with it is the way he's constanly thinking about her... Makes him seem more obsessive than in love.

Also, I have almost no hint at his current relationship with Luna, aside from the description. She gave him some salad ad smiled at him, but that's about it.

The main guard pony is really creeping me out. I can see him totally losing his mind and go luna crazy

this is an extremely sad story. always being near the one you love never able to do anything for fear of gods know what. i actually thought ist was only a little sad until the last line. the spaceing between the words just kind of felt like being punched in the heart each one. its good to smile and be happy next to the one you love. but the happiness is very painful when those small smiles are all that will ever be.

ok now that ive girled out on a puplic message board ima go fid where my testes fell off and stop relating this to my life.

oh yeah. have an upvote and a fav.

Dreams, eh? That's not suspicious at all. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

Well THAT escalated quickly.

Yes. This is coming along quite lovely.

Huehuehue. No pun intended.


i bet he fell asleep next to the bench and is dreaming the whole last part, INCEPTION :moustache:

This chapter made me D'awwww so much :3

Why do I feel that Luna is a changeling? It's strange but it does ties the plot of this story into a cherry not.

Wait! Did this story happen before the canterlot wedding?

*raises sword* PRAISE THE SUN!!!!!!!!

You're in the wrong neighborhood.

Golden Bow is probably gay. I don't have a problem with that, but just I think he is

Story's moving a little faster than I anticipated, especially based on the plot synopsis, but I'm interested.

I absolutly :heart: this!! I am always shipping princess Luna with one of her guards in my one thoughts!:raritystarry: I thought I were the only one!:pinkiehappy:

"Princess Luna, I would like to be your special somepony more than anything else in the entire world."
:rainbowkiss: AWSOME, just AWSOME! :yay:

This story has so much potential it might be one of the best I'll hope to see more of this story in the future and if your stuck or just fed up of writing this story I am willing to help. good writing

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