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Rainbow Dash reminisces about her individual farewells as she prepares to take on the next stage of her life.

A one-shot story on parting ways.

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Is the title a parody of 'One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest"?

This is truly beautiful stuff, man. I don't really agree with how 'guys' is used in such a manner, but it can be overlooked I suppose; love the SoarinDash thing the most! :rainbowwild::raritywink::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile::yay::twistnerd::scootangel::eeyup::moustache::derpytongue2:

'Guys' can be an androgynous term. Fluttershy, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie would most likely use the term 'girls', Applejack would say 'gals', Rarity would say 'ladies', and to me Rainbow Dash would probably stick with whatever term she thought sounded coolest.

1627303 Please don't give me any of that, I have said I don't agree and that is where I stand. :ajbemused::facehoof:

But Vernerok...his opinion...
Is superior.

And the story was great, very heartfelt. Couldn't get too sad though, was too giddy about the SoarinDash...but still feels were had.:twilightsheepish:

1629682 Yeah, hilarious :derpytongue2: And that's all true, sure enough. Exactly how I imagine it would be if she did achieve such a dream in the show. :rainbowdetermined2::fluttercry::applecry::unsuresweetie::raritycry::pinkiesad2:

1627324 WOW, Your an ass its just a saying so stop judging people on how they right there story's.

1631075 It's got nothing to do with the story, it's about how a certain word is being used and my issues with that usage. I have said it can be overlooked for the sake of the story so put don't words to my fingers that I did not type.


Calm your tits people. It's my little pony fanfiction, not politics.

1631120 Whether or not that's even the case, that's his feeling and not mine. :ajsmug:

:raritydespair: Right in the feels...

It took me a moment to realize but is it safe to assume this is sort of prequel to "A Day with Dad"?
The direction it took at the end sorta implies how it sorta began.

Awesome work btw~ :twilightsheepish:

That was great. There are way too many stories where Dash doesn't join the Wonderbolts because of not wanting to leave her friends, nice to read one where she overcomes that issue.

I should have known this story was by you ( didn't check the author until the comments) it's enjoyable and sad, and I almost want to see the fleshed out three chapter version of this chapter. Many thanks for your excellent work

I could have fleshed it out more, but was too lazy didn't feel that it really needed it. The individual character scenes felt realistic (to me), the in between scenes could have been fleshed out more, but they would have been fluff, and I thought I made it obvious (without being TOO obvious) that she was leaving because of a marriage proposal.

I have some other stories to write over winter break (A Day in Bed, A Day at the Doctor's, FiMFriction) which should be pretty fun to write/read.

I found it kind of hard to hold back tears during this story. Also, did you make that up what Rarity said to Dash about "Some things are worth breaking your heart for. It will only heal back stronger"? I swear that I am going to end up quoting you on that because it was amazing.

Is this canon with your other dashxsoarin stories

very well written, i was happy and sad at the same time.

Great writing, you really captured all of their personalities, reactions and emotions perfectly!

Wow great story actually I think this is how it would really go if when dash makes it into the wonderbolts

I love this story very much, it's heart-felt and is just... Nothing can describe how happy and sad I feel. And to finish it all of, a wonderful moral which will constantly reminds us that friendships does not end when one gets distant from each other.
I rate this story 5/5 eggs.

Awww!!! That was the best!

Re read this and I don't know why I didn't put this in the Fav library made me cry at the end GOOD JOB!!:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::rainbowkiss:

That sort of hit me in the feels, well done!

My grading scale is simple:

10/10: might make a fanfic reading or an audio drama of this on my YouTube channel

9/10: still might make a reading on my YouTube channel, but probably not an audio drama.

8/10: adding this to my big favorites library

7/10: adding this to my favorites library, not the big faves

6/10: definitely coming back to this in the future.

5/10: might come back.

4/10: might come back once or twice

3/10: definitely not coming back

2/10: giving criticism about the story

1/10: hating the story overall

Because this was written so well, and that it hit me in the feels, here is my final grade: 6 or 7/10

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