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MyOpinionIsSuperior


Sometimes I draw things. http://theanswerisduh.deviantart.com/

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Rainbow Dash's son learns that unexpected surprises may come from those we underestimate. A story on father/son bonding.

Updated with self-drawn/colored coverart.

Chapters (11)
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I know exactly who the father is.

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Soarin

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I published this right before I went to bed and my sleep deprived brain thought some people might actually be dense enough to not know.

When did you come up with the idea of Rainbow Blitz being the son of Dashie and Soarin'? Because as far as I know, it was my idea. I even made loads of art pieces on my deviantART page.

This looks like fun so far. :pinkiehappy:

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I saw the rule 63 design and liked how it looked, so I thought "why not write something where he's her son?"

I don't really go on deviantart, so I wouldn't know. Nor would I care.

Yay! :yay: A really good, future, story! Can't wait to see where this goes. Like, favorite, and have a stache. :moustache:

:flutterrage:I....NEED.....MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!:rainbowkiss:
:moustache::moustache::moustache:

I'm working on Chapter 2 right now. Hopefully I can make it decent enough to post tonight.

That was fast...

great story mate, looking forward for moar :rainbowlaugh:

This is suprisingly good. I shall await further chapters.

I believe I shall track this story. :moustache:

Very cute! I like the idea of Soarin' being a big softy :rainbowwild:

Tracked. :rainbowkiss:

LOL! Cinnamon challenge!

Great so far:rainbowkiss: and I'm now wondering who are Rainbow Dashs friends are married to:rainbowderp:

I seriously love this Blitz, best pranker ever. cinnamon challenge,that was priceless :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Green eyes give shit away.

hahaha, cinnamon challange?!!! I did that once and yes. it was painful :raritycry:

The story pic for Blitz.... it just kinda, ruins things for me, he looks so wierd! I can't picture his eyes as I read the story now.

My only complaint is that the chapters are so short. Keep it up!

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What's wrong with it?

1022868 THE EYES, IT DOTH NOT LOOK LIKE THE OTHER FILLIES OR COLTS! The iris or whatever you call the colored part is too big.

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Seems fine to me.




SUBMIT, HERITIC! YOU WILL BE ASSIMILA-uhhh.... sorry, slip of the tongue. :twilightsheepish:

1022890 INFIDEL, YOU ARE FINISHED!

I've put too much cinnamon on my toast one time. It wasn't enough to be painful but it tasted horrible.

OK this is going into my favorites! :pinkiehappy:

Ah the old cinnamon spoonful trick. I like this little guy! :rainbowlaugh:

Just like his mother...
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So the rest of the mane 6 are all married and have given birth to their alternate selves? Cool.:pinkiehappy:

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All I did was look up 'Rainbow Blitz colt' on google image search and then recolor the eyes. He can look like however you want to imagine him as given the description.

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Shorter chapters allow for more frequent updates. I personally prefer knowing a writer is still active than being surprised 2 months later with 10,000 words and having to reread previous chapters because I forgot what was going on.

Lol poor Rainbow.

1024144 I TRIED, I did, really, but now I only image him as..... A FREAK!

Awesome story within your story!

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First! Sorry, always wanted to do that. Great story! I like the development so far. Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

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You should be sorry. You were second.

My guess is the he is going to see Twilight:eeyup:

AYC

1049865 I am ashamed.. I was close. So close. :applecry:

I am loving this story!

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