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"When the dust has cleared, and victory denied; a summit too lofty, river a little too wide. If we keep our pride, though paradise is lost, we will pay the price, but we will not count the cost."

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Although Equestria and the Crystal Empire have remained peaceful for years, the tales of Twilight Sparkle and her friends' adventures saving the world from evil are still at the forefront of many creatures' minds. Princess Flurry Heart, by way of her parents, has knowledge of her aunt's other escapades that never reached the news. Of course, as a young filly, she wants to emulate her heroic aunt. As her supporting father, Shining has actively encouraged her by rarely interfering in her attempts at mimicking Twilight. Even if her current interest might involve ending the world if it goes poorly.

Sometimes, Cadance wished he'd be less blasé.


Late (but not quite late) entry for the Shining Armor is a Terrible Dad competition.

And, as always, thank you to Everfree Pony for all the editing assistance!

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Just fyi, you're not late. Contest was extended until March 29th. Good luck in the contest! Can't wait to read your entry. :twilightsmile:

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:rainbowlaugh: Life has been in such a rush the last few days that it slipped my mind to change the comment below the divider between description and author's notes. Runic already informed me that it was extended, but thanks for the reminder! I hope you enjoy the story when it comes time to judge everyone's entries. :twilightsmile:

So was Flurry actually evil, or was she being controlled? Her way of speaking changed big time past a certain point.

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Controlled/influenced. Or is she simply putting on an act? Guess Shining (or really more Cadance) needs to keep an eye out on the resident small, innocent creatures for the next while to be sure. :moustache:

The Hungerer is pretty chill as far as most eldritch horrors go.

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Flurry has to start somewhere. :rainbowlaugh:

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