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A steaming cup of coffee that will never spill – the perfect gift for a dad!

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This was a really beautiful piece! I almost didn't stop to read it, but I'm very glad I did. Thank you so much for sharing!

Our boy Stygian doesn't get enough love. Fantastic read, absolutely fantastic.

What a brilliant piece of writing! Stygian really needs someone to open up to. He's so lonely.

Then the bundle was taken from his dirty, soot-coloured hands, and Stygian slowly took a few steps backwards, feeling lighter than he’d ever felt in his life. Light-headed and warm and… the clouds were spinning.

I *hate* nitpicking a story as great as this, but the anatomy seemed inconsistent with this passage, seeing as it's the only section to mention hands.

Otherwise, this was positively incredible.

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That was amazing. Very evocative and expressive; allowing us to truly enter Stygianʼs mind. Your prose and narration are lovely. And those descriptions are beautiful - special love to the way the flames are described.

Also, wouldnʼt be surprised if this was an actual extract from Stygianʼs own book series, Me and My Shadow. (Yes, he wrote a book. Itʼs canon; check S8ʼs “A Rock hoof and a Hard Place.”)

You, dear author, have a fantastic way with words. Into Heartstrings (2) this goes!

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