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"Always expect the unexpected in life, after all, life is unpredictable." Jeff Manns, a 20 year-old high school graduate, has finally moved out of his parents home. Jeff's life couldn't be better, he has a job, he's living on his own, the whole world before him, and he has... six magical miniature fillies? How did these creatures end up in Jeff's life, and what does he even know about taking care of these three inch tall fillies? Absolutely nothing could go wrong.

Sidenote - the lovely Fred2266 has actually done a reading from a long while ago on some of the first chapters on this story! So show him some support and enjoy. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlrBLTmK4B0&t=19s

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 322 )

Sounds cute. I will have to read it when I have time. :pinkiesmile:

Not bad.... shall favorite. :pinkiesmile:

I demand that someone draw a picture of all the girls in filly form based off this story...... that is if you don't mind :fluttershysad:

1394224 That would be awesome. I actually talked with the artist of the stories current picture, that picture actually inspired me to draw out this story. Like you said, some artwork for this story would be awesome!

This is nice. I like it. A lot. Please continue.:eeyup:

Ok... Im gonna die... This is just an accident waiting to happen... And by accident i mean-

HHHNNNNNGG!!!!!

that..

Keep up the good work my friend! Loving this!!!

1396116 Thank you very much for the comment! I hope you enjoy the story as I add on!

1399538 Most things like this are, but we will have to wait and see where the story takes us. Glad you're enjoying it!

1405516 You're welcome and I most certainly will.:raritywink:

1405516 in one of the very last paragraphs you put jack instead of jeff, unless of course you meant that aj was following jeff for some reason

1410544 Well what do you know, it does say Jack. Thanks for the pointer! Hoped you liked the story none the less lol.

1410588 don't worry i did enjoy the first chapter and i think i will enjoy the rest of the story and, another thing this didn't read like an almost 8k chapter (in a good way)

1410613 :twilightsmile: Thanks. I actually took the time to finally fix Jeff's thoughts, i completely forgot to Italics them. Well now that's all fixed as well as where it says Jack. Thanks again for the comment and feedback! Expect more story soon! :pinkiehappy:

Trixie, you do not make deals with Discord, Its like dealing with the devil :trixieshiftleft:

The main character is 24 and ⅓ their size

1435468 I honestly had no idea. Jeff had the same thoughts I did when I wrote that, I'm not doing math in my head. :derpytongue2: I hope you're enjoying the story :twilightsmile:

Twilight will eventually read Twilight and hate herself.. I mean the book.:twilightangry2:

1435510 Good thing Jeff didn't name her Twilight, he probably would have hated himself.

'Following the sound, Jeff rushed towards the spare room, doing his best to not start pancaking.'

Why you no want to pancake?:pinkiesad2:

Pancakes are delicious!:trollestia:

1438049 You have a very valid point there, pancakes are delicious.... I'm kind of hungry now.

Well, this is (surprisingly) a very good story. I did not expect as much considering the premise but I still am really enjoying this. I can't wait for the next chapter but please don't rush it.

1444743 Thanks for the comment! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I normally only rush my shorter stories, probably because I know I can get them out faster. This story however will be fairly long, so don't worry about it being rushed too much. I believe I should have chapter 3 ready by the end of this week, or the beginning of next. Thanks again!

1445052Yay! Lengthened time between chapters! I have yet to see a story where this turned out badly.....:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: Ah what am i saying. I doubt you could butcher this story.... I will be quiet now.

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Though you finishing writing it, and me finishing re-writing it are two very different things.:rainbowwild:

1502939 Why thank you! :twilightsmile: I hope you enjoy the rest of this story as it releases!

Lol! Mr. Crocker has returned!:rainbowlaugh: I wonder how Timmy is doing?

You have your own version of Mr.Crocker? EXCELLENT!

this is going to be a fun story. Fav'd

1517219 Thanks so much! :twilightsmile:

1517292 I'm so going to need to have that kind of scene somewhere in this story! Much hilarity shall ensue! :pinkiehappy:

I was going to talk about Mr. Crocker, but I was beaten to it. :fluttercry:

1517292 Or be like the woman from "Barnyard".

1518133 Tell me about it.

1518099 Better luck in the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

1517143 Now that I've thought about it, I may have a reference to Timmy somewhere, you never know. :raritywink:

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Or better yet....


Cosmo.:moustache:

1527282 That would make for an interesting reference. I'll see if I can put that in somewhere. :raritywink:

Ah, nothing like an obsessed psycho to get the party started.:pinkiecrazy:

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I can't wait to see how this will all backfire upon him. :trollestia:

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Did you fix the "pancaking" typo? I put that in there on purpose.:rainbowwild:
Though looks like none of our readers watch Video Games Awesome...So I guess the reference was lost.

1633977 Yes I did spot the typo, I was wondering why the hay it said that. I didn't even get the joke :rainbowlaugh: Ah well. I'm sure they'll get the references in this next chapter :raritywink:

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Yeah...at least those references aren't totally obscure...but yeah...it's a joke from an internet show I watch...they replaced panicking with pancaking...I always found it funny. Ah well.:rainbowwild:

FAIRY GODPARENTS!
And the evil McNevilstein got busted.

Well now, its set I hear crooker's voice in my head. ur totally busted man this ain't no cartoon u will be in jail for a while

I love the Mr.Crooker references your putting in here:rainbowlaugh:

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