Many think they know me and who I am...but do they really? I've had many hardships and blessings in my life, but many ponies thought I never had a chance at life at all. None of them gave me that chance, will you?
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if there was a raing scale for mlp fics that went from one to ten
this fic would break it with the sheer amount of pure amazing
and i thankyou
1436796 Well thank you for the comment
Expect more soon!
My only complaint is that when Derpy lost her job, there wasnt a very emotional feel to it. Either it was explained too fast with not enough detail, or I just read the Damn scene too fast
but a great story otherwise. I'll tell my friends about this, cause it needs more veiws than this.
1439635 Yeah, sadly this story was a little fast paced when I first wrote it, and I know it; but I personally just wanted to leave it as close as it was when I first wrote it. Thanks again for enjoying the story! I'll upload the last parts soon!
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And then spontaneous Doctor Whooves appears!
another amazing chapter!
1447421 I'm glad you enjoyed it.
1448850
enjoy it i do not
I LOVE IT!!!
a....a....a sequil....*sniffle....THANK YOU SO MUHUHUCH!
1453261 Of course, this story deserves more!
1453863
you can say that again!
you sir/mam have made a story that has gotton me addicted
and all i can say is thank you for a simple bliss in by normaly boring and dim life
It seems like Joe Dirt stumbling upon the town in his movie.
1459694 It does sort of resemble that doesn't it.
1439635 i think you read it too fast don't was a littel lacking but she lost a lot of jobs before so maybe it wasn't that big to her any more.
1479590 True but this time it was to the point of her leaving what had been her home for so long. Even though it was a tough place to live, but still to run away from a place you had known well and just abandon it is quite emotional. It's more along the lines of how fast paced this story was when I first wrote it, but the story is still very good despite my terrible writing way back when
1479659 I will reread it. Slowly. Very slowly. i will let every last word sink into my subconsious until i am derpy herself.
(couldnt find a crazed twilight face)
1529637 They really do need a crazy Twilight pic. It would make all of the difference. I don't really know if reading it slowly will make a difference, but you never know. Like I said earlier, this story was fast paced when I first wrote it. (Way back when on FanFiction
)
Well, it doesn't hurt to try, now does it?
I wanted emotion in the story. I got bitch slapped by a wave of feels just now.
And now I'm crying manly rivers. Bravo
.
:D I'm so happy now
1531489 I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, I should re read it myself, it has been sometime. I'll let you know if I cry too
Alrighty then. If you cry at your own story, youre a pro. Have fun! And bring some tissues for dem tears.
Oh my god... My feels. I really like this story. It's different because not everyone hates Derpy, and
We really need more stories like this one
Intresting fact, this was the first pony fic I read (& rember at least).
1535901 Finally after some catching up on school, and some other things, as well as working on my other story, I finally read the story through and through, and I honestly got teary eyed now and again, I forgot how much I enjoyed this story. I really look forward to getting started on the sequel soon! Just need to do some more work on The Little Things In Life, and then my new story One Last Arrow. (Yes I started another, I hate my creative mind
)
1631454 Thank you so much for the comment
I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Look forward to the sequel, A Tale of Lost Time!
1647657 Oh really? Wow, that's pretty cool. I'm glad you at least remember the story
i really expect derpy's dad to die at the i love you part, that would probably have made half of the followers cry like a little bitch
I'm glad to see that the Party raised Derpy/Ditzy's Spirit. She needed that.
Onto the next chapter!
Derpy and Lyra.............Naw, I'm reading waaayy too deep into something like that. lol Anywho, Derpy has her job now. So far so good for a new start for her.
*poses dramatically* "ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!"
Yay! It's almost Winter Wrap-up time!
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*throws my cup down as I say* "ANOTHER Chapter!!"
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The feels at the end were nice.
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I'm proud enough to admit that when Dinky comforted Derpy...I shed a tear.
I like how your putting everything together in this story. Derpy/Ditzy coming to find and love Muffins, finding Dinky, and getting her Job in Ponyville.
*liquid pride* TT __ TT
The feels made water fall out of my eyes.
I'm not really sure what to say of this chapter....other than I know the situation that Derpy went through with a family member of mine a long while back.
...........Anywho! Great Job. I'm sure by the end of this story I'm gonna have to replace my "Feels" button since you've been bashing on it these last few chapters.
ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
......that's all I got for now.
Well done author. Well done on this Derpy/Ditzy story.
Now, as much as I don't like a good tale to end, unto the last chapter.
1529637 Here you go. Is this face the one you were looking for?
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3523022 Ah crazy Twilight, my favorite moments are from that episode. I should probably take the time and overhaul this story, it is old, and my first, there's much to improve on, but it's still the first I wrote, and one I do love. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
3523059 Your welcome. There's not really a whole lot to redo in your story. Just a few misspelled words here and there, a couple of missing words and that's it. Besides that, that's all.
3523022 yes, it was. :D xD