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I just got into My Little Pony, and I hope I can come up with some good stories for this site. My favroite chaacters are Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Spike, Discord, Luna, and Derpy Hooves.

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Dinky Hooves keeps on getting teased by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon due to the ditziness of her mother Derpy. but the harassment ends with the timely arrival of Spike.

The two of them, now really knowing each other that well, agree to go to the dance as friends. but as the night goes on, these two kids end up discovering that there might be something more about them than meets the eye.

Disclaimer: Takes place before Season 5

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 69 )

that is an interesting idea you got there and dInky deserves some good love

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What can i say, Dinmky is my favorite background foal. Plus she got me a good friend and also helped me indirectly with my personal oc

Interesting pair-up here, especially with Spike standing up to stinky Diamond & Silver! :moustache:

Looking forward to see where the story goes from here! :twilightsmile::derpytongue2:

A very imaginative story, I'm looking forward to the sequel :)

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Thank you :pinkiehappy:
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Not a sequel, but another chapter :moustache:

Why isn't anyone doing anything about Diamond Tiara?:facehoof:

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Next chapter, Diamond Tiara will get her comeuppance

11709393 Because her mother is president of the school board.

Not a pairing I ever thought about, but still very cute :twilightsmile:

11709504 Same. I usually ship Spike with Sweetie Belle.

Cute ship!

There may be a few spelling errors here and there but it's still a cute little story.

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Thank you :)

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Really? I thought I checked them all. Dang...I'll go back and find and fix them :)

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youre welcome and interesting to show spike being fed up

Nice dinner conversation between Spike/Dinky, especially him been tired of the sidelined treatment he's gotten from the Mane 6!:moustache:

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Right, I always felt like Spike should have at least talked to them aobut their treatment of him on the show...I swear some of the writers on this site treat him way better than he was treated in canon.

spike opening up to her really quickly! but it's good, to get all your secrets out early

Nice work! Though you had a few mistakes here and there.

If I may add, the fact how their emotions boil and such, kinda reminds me of my personal oc, who in a friend's Story is a close friend to dinky with pip. No doubt pip would defend dinky too.

Also, is silver too scared after diamomd pushes it too far or what about her? Just wondering.

Diamond really pushed it too far on that last bit, glad she got instant karma on it!:flutterrage:

That last bit at the lake made up for it, it was adorable!:moustache:

JD1

So glad for Diamond Tiara.

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If I live to be 100 I still won't understand the seemingly personal vendetta the show's crew had against Spike. Aside from being treated as an afterthought from the main cast, He never had friends his own age. The closest we had was Thorax, but the writer's were SUPER quick to end that before it started and give that story to Starlight. Not to mention the unfortunate implications that Sparkle's Seven gave us that Twilight Velvet and Night Light refused to see him as their son, despite raising him alongside Twi and Shining.

Damn, Diamond messed up so bad that even Silver is glaring at her

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I'll fix mistakes after I gerlt off of work, Coolio and I have no doubt pip would want to defend Dinky. While, Silver will get her karma too, even if she didn't throw punches, she still mocked and teased Dinky.

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I agree! And thanks, I liked writing the lake scene :)


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Huh? What do,you mean?

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I agree, but hey that's why we have this site to begin with, to give characters we like more characterization and see then as nothing but jokes

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of course and my OC, pardon, hold habit.

It was also as the outburst you did thee matched him, being rather inesecure

Dinky sighed. “Well, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon keep making fun of me for it!” She exclaimed. “Like every chance they get, they keep on telling me how stupid my mom is and all that stuff.” She then sighed and looked away. “I love my mom, and nothing would please me more than to bring her to the dance…but I worry about what every other pony might say.”

Is this during the time before season 5 came around

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Uea, this is before season 5...I should have put a disclaimer at the info...I'll do that when I get home from work

JD1

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For getting what she deserved.

Deroy's smile kept going on. “That's still fine, who are you going with?”

Who's Deroy?

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Shoot! I'll go back and fix it, sorry aobut that. It's always he small typos that gets away from you.

i did for sure! had to chuckle at the weeding dream. i mean, aint she too young to understand it yet?

and pardon if i was upsetting with the comments or anything.

but i appreciate how silver truly cared in the end

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Well hs dis a kid, kids often tend to dream about marriage, not all of them but some do.

You weren't upsetting with the commemts I appreciate feedback.

To me, Silver Spoom I always found a bit more sympathetic, like at times I often feel like she follows Diamond Tiara out of loyalties or something like that.

A cute little love story; you definitely don't see many ship-fics where Spike and Dinky get paired together that often.

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of course and youre welcome, just meant the oc thing and such

exactly, i cant really imagine shes as bad as diamond, like many thing, more a follower or out of fear, being actually kind

Aww this is a pretty nice start of the story so dinky is worry about going to the dance because of diamond tiara and silver spoon make fun of her and her mother but then Spike stepped in and protected her then after that they have a pretty nice talk and even Spike ask her to the dance which she said yes and now both of them were pretty excited for this I wonder how this will go

Glad to not only see Spike talking with Twilight about the treatment he's gotten from her & the Mane 5 but also rotten Diamond/Silver been forced to apologize, even going so far as Twilight putting the fear of god on Diamond after hearing she hit him! :twilightangry2:

Of course it was nice seeing Spike/Dinky becoming a couple at the end there, well done! :moustache:

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I agree. And thank you :)

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I agree.


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Thanks :)

He doesn’t like Dinky like that! He was in love with Rarity, Rarity! Dinky he just saw as a friend…well sorta, he was hoping that they could know each other a bit better tonight at dinner and at the dance…he then shook his head, now was not the time to deal with conflicting thoughts, now was the time to prepare. He just has to go to Rarity’s to get his tuxedo.

Sometimes that happens but maybe it's for the best

Deroy entered the room and gasped, making the illy turn to her. “Dinky, you look so lovely.”

Deroy lol 😆 :derpytongue2: must be her cousin

Spike then put his food down and gave a deep sigh. “Because…I feel like that sometimes.” He said. “You see, when me and Twilight came here to Ponyville, all of a sudden she had a whole bunch of new friends to call her own…and what about me? There have been times where I have either been told to stay behind.” He sighed.

Yeah I did felt like something was up it just feels like in the earlier Hasbro it felt like they have no idea what to do with him which it kind of sucks he had more potential and everything

Heh, they should have filed for a restraining order against DT. :twilightsmile:

“WHY?” He exclaimed in anger. “Why is it that I am all of a sudden tossed to the side like trash? What did I do to deserve this? Do they hate me?” He asked as tears began to spill out of the corners of his eyes. “Are they embarrassed of me because I’m a dragon?” He asked softly as tears spilled out of his eyes

Oh dear I wonder this was a call out to Hasbro or the people who made the show why have they always keep forgetting about him or making him the butt of the joke and I get that it kind of frustrating that always happens I don't know why

Spike sniffles again. “But what if she thinks I'm being a wuss?”

Twilight is a lot of things but making fun of you or being mean to you I don't think that's not the case she would never do that

Wow that that kind of escalated a little quickly but also pretty sad but it also is cute moments so it looks like Spike and Dinky are ready for the dance but first they decided to eat before they go there and basically just enjoying their company but then Spike kind of dropped the ball about being useless that every time something's going down he's always being forgotten which I don't think they were not doing that on purposely it kind of reminds me of my older siblings doing that as well during my younger years and it gets very upsetting I guess because they want to be with somebody's own age or something that's usually always the excuse but then dinky also said something about her mother that everybody thinks she be dangerous for her and thinking they will take her away from her mother which that would never happen as well I do like how they both comfort each other and it's always nice but it looks like the dance is starting so they better hurry

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