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MLPFan98


I just got into My Little Pony, and I hope I can come up with some good stories for this site. My favroite chaacters are Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Spike, Discord, Luna, and Derpy Hooves.

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Spike had managed to go back to normal after his birthday monster meltdown. but feeling horrible for what he had done, he runs away. But after being found and encouraged by the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Spike is ready to face the ponies of Ponyville and beg for forgiveness...the question is though...will they forgive him?

Disclaimer: Takes place after Secret to My Excess

Cover Art not mine.

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Comments ( 12 )

[EDIT: Mentioned typo that's since been fixed.]

11731580
Just fixed it :twilightblush:

This was sweet as 🍬

This was a good read! I especially like the part when Rarity declined Spike's feelings as gently as she could. If only that was applied earlier on the show.

11731608
Thanks :)

11731679
Thanks, and yea u wish it happened in the show...but whatever.

11731685
Sorry, I fixed it :twilightblush:

I know people already pointed it out, but it was sweet, a cute little story to enjoy. :raritystarry:

The white unicorn sighed. “Spike, you have no idea how much of a sweet drake you are. You're kind, helping, and willing to do anything for us all.” She then gave a small sigh, a sigh that Spike was sort of dreading. “But I’m sorry…but I have to decline your feelings for me.” She said.

RIP Spike.

:raritystarry: not like them young, you never had a chance.

This is a very good one-shot.

Honestly it's pretty sweet in seeing that everyone cares about Spike.

Though not fond of Rarity breaking Spike's heart since she kind of took advantage of his crush on her at times.
And that it's kind of just left hanging afterwards.

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