Twilight was trying to use a spell that could open a portal for her to visit the human world without using the mirror. But rather than a portal, she accidentally summons Ben Tennyson and his partner Rook Blonko instead. it couldn't be a worse time because they're facing a crisis. Until they can get home, Ben and Rook will make new friends and explore this new world as three familiar enemies plan to strike back at them, (This takes place in between Seasons 6 and 7 and during Season 8 of Omniverse.
Romance will happen at one point so Ben will be aged two years older than he was in the original show.
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Glad it back
"I've never seen a dragon up close before!" Does the episode Be-Knighted from Ben 10: Alien Force ring any bells?
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Darm it! I totally forgot! It's been so long since i seen Alien Force, I'll fix it once I get back from work. Sorry about that
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Maybe just put never see a hatchling dragon instead
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Yea...that as well
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Just don;t try to rush, alright?
OK it is getting good
Do the so far is kickass keep it up my guy a little repetitive with Ben exploding yourself but that really can't be helped in this type of crossover story
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Ben exploding? Huh?
Ben is 16 in Omniverse not 18.
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Explaining my dude are the correct trick
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Oh right, I forgot to explain. But I decided to age Ben a bit here, I did say it was going to be an alterd version of Malgax attacks
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I wanted to age Ben a bit here...since I am going to romance him with sonepony
Harem I would make twilight main or Applejack
Doesn’t derpy have a daughter
Love how this going by away
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So a harem and have either Twilight or Applejsck the main girl in the harem?
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It's never confirmed if Dinky is her daughter in the main show, in this fic, I might have Dinky be her little sister instead.
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Thanks :)
wonderful chapter, I also like to be a harem story too, if that's alright with you.
also keep up the amazing work.
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Thanks. And I'm thin I ng the same, but I'm trying to wonder who would be in the harem include in besides the Mane Six (and no, Starlight will not be part of it.) Like I want to say Derpy..but idk
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well if your going to add more to the harem, here are a list of some ponies for the story, that if you wanted to add.
#Princess Luna
#Princess Celestia
# Vinyl Scratch
# lyra Heartstrings
# Bonbon
# Octavia Melony
# Nurse RedHeart
# Spitfire
there are more ponies I can think of, but I just start something small first
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Hmm...interesting choices...maybe not Celesita or Luna though.
Lyra and Bon Bon are cute but they belong together.
Vinyl Scartch and Octavia Melody....might work..
Don't know about the other two
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But again it's all in the deciding stages
I think you meant to say over 1 million/1,000,000 instead of a measly thousand?
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your right, I went back to fix it. sorry about that
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Why is Rook using contractions? Revonnahganders consider contractions as bad languages remember?
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I'm sorry..I forgot, it's been a whole since I seen the show..would you be able to tell me what a contraction is? So that way I can remember and not mess up for next time?
I'm sorry
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Wait, I now rmemeber...I'm sorry I'll go back and fix any contractions I see Rook making. Please forgive me
Maybe don't add Pinkie siblings, I liking how this going so far I be waiting for next chapter.
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Words like can't, won't, I'm you're, etc.
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Thnak you. and again, I apologize.
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Thanks for the suggestion and compliment
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I'd love to see Ben and Rook meet Shining Armor and Cadence!
Rainbow dash going to be in shock of her life after the race with Ben.
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Thanks :)
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Cadence and Shining Armor will appear at some point .
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Oh yea, it's going to be one big shocker for her indeed
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Hope things get better, great chapter, also just curious what Twi-Spri base off on.
Am i missing something?
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Thanks.
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Just something I came up with, also, it was inspired by the nickname for Twilight Sparkle from Equestria Girls, who is often nicknamed Sci-Twi.
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Fixed it. Sorry about that
Will we see Ben in Aricorn form because the omnitrix is scanning for DNA that is not in the database
But wasn’t Ben already around 18 by the time of Omniverse?
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no, he was 16 during Omniverse.
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You know, I just had a thought. So long as you don't show him doing anything explicit, it should be fine. He can get all the hugs and cuddles he wants, so long as he keeps his pants on. If you want something like that to happen, just cut to black, and make a mention of how Ben has a goofy look on his face the next morning. Easy as can be.
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I mean he is going to be 18 still. but yea for the most part it will still be nothing but hugs and cuddles. What about kissing?
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That's usually fine, so long as you don't go crazy. Like a little peck, or a longer smooch to say "thank you" or whatever is fine. But the moment it starts to get really heated, you should cut the scene off. Don't wanna get a red card because you went too far, now do you?
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Right, but as I said. He will still be around 18 here, just to make it more appropriate
Just a little trivia, using contractions like "don't", "can't", "they're", and so on, is like swearing for Rook's people. Wiki link if you wanna read it.
https://ben10.fandom.com/wiki/Revonnahgander