• Member Since 19th Oct, 2011
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RustedRabbit


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When he was younger, Spike thought nothing would ever change. But part of growing up is learning that letting go is a part of life. He'd never forget them. Spike centric, oneshot.

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I cried when i was not even an eighth of the way through this.
Am I too emotional, or am I connecting with the characters at a deep level?

#2 · Oct 20th, 2011 · · ·

.....beautiful.......great work....great work.....

Well done.

Darn you. You made me cry!

Spectacularly emotional story. Well done!

Oh god this story, it is great, but so sad. I really need to stop reading sad fanfics... I don't think I can take just moving stories anymore. :pinkiesad2:

#6 · Oct 20th, 2011 · · ·

Nice job.

This was great, just superbly done. All I can do is shout :yay: and hope to see more stories like this in the future.

Now if you will excuse me, I need a tissue.

#8 · Oct 20th, 2011 · · ·

Just beautiful. By the end I found myself reading through the tears. Now though...I just have this great big bubbling laughter and a melancholy smile. The end, just that feeling of hopefulness...thank you. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for such a wonderful, sad, happy, charged story. You've made my night.

#9 · Oct 20th, 2011 · · ·

Just beautiful. By the end I found myself reading through the tears. Now though...I just have this great big bubbling laughter and a melancholy smile. The end, just that feeling of hopefulness...thank you. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for such a wonderful, sad, happy, charged story. You've made my night.

A sad but well written story.
...now to go find a much needed comedy to read...

Wow.. Just.. Wow. That was.. Amazing. I shed manly tears. MANLY. FUCKING. TEARS.

I read this to my very much brony little brother (11 years old) he laughed at every ponies death. :facehoof:

It was Beautiful but i laughed at every death im very sorry. :pinkiehappy: :heart:

That was my bro above me he is an ass hole:ajbemused:

found you here and read this again!!!!!!!! if anypony is reading the comments to see if this story is any good, then stop with the comments and start reading this you will not be disappointed!



:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

I will not be lying at all as I say this, as it comes straight from the heart.

This story, it moved me. Never in my life would I actually think that I would read such a beautifully written story, so wonderful I cried. In other stories, I could actually hold back the pain and sorrow as I comment. As I am typing this, my eyes are wet with tears.

Yes, life is depressing at times. I know that. There is nothing more we could actually do than to accept it and move on. Every day, people die. But their memories live on. All the laughter, all the fun, all the smiles, they will never fade away. Because as long as they are remembered, they will continue living on forever.

Never stop writing, and make the best of your talent. :pinkiesmile: Just laugh and never forget who you truly are...

this story is truely wonderful. it brings their friendship out of the fairy tale version where nothing that bad ever happens. It truely reflects on how the people that you get to know in life affect who you will become, be it a grumpy dragon hoarding gems or a librarian living with friends.

Tears just so many tear! I had to run and hide in the bath room so my family didn't see me cry. :raritycry:

Quite possibly the single best piece of work here, filled with wisdom and inspiring words.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart, keep writing and don't forget to laugh every once in a while!:pinkiesmile:

:heart:
I cannot think of words to describe how wonderfully written this story is.
Quite frankly it's just amazing.

i cannot begin to say what i'm feeling. i just feel like i should tell all my friends that i love them. thank you so much. :pinkiesad2:

Why is it that I keep only running into the fanfics that make me cry when I'm still at school! (Great job btw)

30501 that's totally not creepy

You want to know whats sad?:fluttercry:

I couldn't cry a single tear.

I am pathcetic. Stupid proudness.

this was just absolutely beautiful, i was near tears by the end of it.
will you be doing another piece like this where spike has to deal with the passing of Rarity, Applejack, and the CMC?

Beautifully done. A great lesson for all of us to learn is to celebrate life a it's fullest, and when Death comes for us in time to just remember our lives, remember the good times, remember the bad times, remember the joy, the pain, because all of it made us who we are. Also, always shall we remember that we have family and friends that shall stay with us even through death. Breathtaking fan fiction.:fluttercry::pinkiesad2: liquid pride shedded.

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