• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2016

Slick Dash


Ditzy has a lot of fun in Ponyville, especially with her daughter Dinky, but sometimes Someponies are mean to Ditzy and she thinks that's not nice, she doesn't like bullies!
A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!
Felt like giving this story a try, it's a risk with it's style of sounding like Ditzy's conciousnous but hopefully some of you enjoy it!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 23 )

'See author, instant like without reading'

Will say something properly when iv actually read it :pinkiesmile:

like the name friend, and profile pic. going to read and will tell you what i think.

On a proper note, found a an error that is worth touching up. 'She lies to walk'

A quaint touching story, it as it reminded of me of my primary school years a little. Good stuff :twilightsmile:

This was very cute! Usually stories like this don't phase me that easily, but this one did. :twilightsmile:

Good job!

A few spelling errors where they shouldn't be. Fix those before someone bugs you about them. (besides me. XD)

that was amazing in my openion, short and sweet just how i like it. i wish you put an epic scene with ditzy telling those two brats off. but o well :pinkiehappy: good story. :derpytongue2:

Not kind my vision of Derpy (I prefer her ForrestGumpish, or something like that), but still heartwarming :raritywink:

Usually, when someone writes a story from the perspective of Ditzy/Derpy, it just... doesn't feel right.

This, however, was great. I had a smile plastered on my face almost the entire time. :pinkiehappy:

so...awesome! :rainbowkiss: absolutely enjoyed this story!

D'awww! :twilightblush:
So cute. I loved it

i prefer stories like these, the cute little funny stories that should be in MLP as opposed to shipping and serious adventure stories

Tiny spelling errors in the synopsis, but everyone makes them on the words you did, so it's all good! Favorited

Aww, I haven't read anything like it in quite a while. Though I did imagine Derpy being a bit more intelligent.

A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!

This is great. I was rally saddened by the fillies' taunting of Ditzy. All in all, a very touching story. :twilightsmile:

Dam you silver spoon and diamond tiara y u mean to ditzy and dinky

Written a bit less detailed than I would like, but over all it was cute and heart warming. :derpytongue2:

I love stories like this, my headcanon is that Ditzy is actually a lot smarter than others give her credit for, but I loved seeing inside the thoughts of your impression of her, she is adorable

I also like the fact that you call her Ditzy. I know most of the time when authors call her Derpy they mean well, but it always DOES seem a bit insulting.

I'm sorry but I hate Stupid Derpy stories. :ajbemused: Down voted on principle. Nothing personal.

I liked this little story, although it might be worth your time to give it the once over. There were one or two spelling errors. :twilightsmile:

Nice story, I love Ditzy, or Derpy, or whatever you want to call her ( as long as its not stupid, loser, etc..). I generally think of her as smarter than you portrayed her in this story, but I like it none-the-less.:twilightsmile:


Cute story about the best mother/daughter duo of Ponyville.

Derpy reminds me of Forrest Gump. A little slow and silly quite often, but a good parent and very protective.

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