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Slick Dash


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Ditzy has a lot of fun in Ponyville, especially with her daughter Dinky, but sometimes Someponies are mean to Ditzy and she thinks that's not nice, she doesn't like bullies!
A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!
Felt like giving this story a try, it's a risk with it's style of sounding like Ditzy's conciousnous but hopefully some of you enjoy it!

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Comments ( 21 )

like the name friend, and profile pic. going to read and will tell you what i think.
:twilightsmile:

This was very cute! Usually stories like this don't phase me that easily, but this one did. :twilightsmile:

Good job!

A few spelling errors where they shouldn't be. Fix those before someone bugs you about them. (besides me. XD)

that was amazing in my openion, short and sweet just how i like it. i wish you put an epic scene with ditzy telling those two brats off. but o well :pinkiehappy: good story. :derpytongue2:

Not kind my vision of Derpy (I prefer her ForrestGumpish, or something like that), but still heartwarming :raritywink:

Usually, when someone writes a story from the perspective of Ditzy/Derpy, it just... doesn't feel right.

This, however, was great. I had a smile plastered on my face almost the entire time. :pinkiehappy:

so...awesome! :rainbowkiss: absolutely enjoyed this story!

D'awww! :twilightblush:
So cute. I loved it

i prefer stories like these, the cute little funny stories that should be in MLP as opposed to shipping and serious adventure stories

Aww, I haven't read anything like it in quite a while. Though I did imagine Derpy being a bit more intelligent.

A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!
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This is great. I was rally saddened by the fillies' taunting of Ditzy. All in all, a very touching story. :twilightsmile:

Dam you silver spoon and diamond tiara y u mean to ditzy and dinky

Written a bit less detailed than I would like, but over all it was cute and heart warming. :derpytongue2:

I love stories like this, my headcanon is that Ditzy is actually a lot smarter than others give her credit for, but I loved seeing inside the thoughts of your impression of her, she is adorable

I also like the fact that you call her Ditzy. I know most of the time when authors call her Derpy they mean well, but it always DOES seem a bit insulting.

I'm sorry but I hate Stupid Derpy stories. :ajbemused: Down voted on principle. Nothing personal.

I liked this little story, although it might be worth your time to give it the once over. There were one or two spelling errors. :twilightsmile:

Nice story, I love Ditzy, or Derpy, or whatever you want to call her ( as long as its not stupid, loser, etc..). I generally think of her as smarter than you portrayed her in this story, but I like it none-the-less.:twilightsmile:

~TheEmpressEclipse~

Cute story about the best mother/daughter duo of Ponyville.

Derpy reminds me of Forrest Gump. A little slow and silly quite often, but a good parent and very protective.

Styled like Bubbles. I like it.

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