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Slick Dash


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Good story. Funny how a lack of information from the show can lead to so many sad stories.

Damn good story Slick! Very thoughtful and creative.

That was beautiful :heart: DAMN GOOD STORY BROTHER!!!!!

Eh.

I mean, it seemed believable, but... it just seemed like Mac was just wangsting far too much. Plus there were a few errors, which are rather big to me.

I suppose it's OK. :trixieshiftright:

BR

Good, but good.

Really good, but really sad!! :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::ajsleepy:

690957 Glad you enjoyed it, :applejackunsure: sorry for any tears shed.
690894 well I guess that's ... good? :rainbowwild:
690885 Fair enough, you can't please everyone, but thatnk you for reading anyway :pinkiesmile:
690850 :pinkiehappy: Glad you enjoyed it!
690817 As always, good to see yah man! Glad you enjoyed it!
690814 Glad you liked it. And god yes! so many dash's parent fics and scootaloo adopted stuff going round! :rainbowlaugh: (I know cos I contributed to the Scootaloo ones :raritywink:)

Now I know what goes through other people's heads makes much more sence than what goes through mine.:ajsmug:

THIS IS AMAZING! I wouldn't be surprised if this got featured. :ajsmug:

691108 Would be my first ever feature. Would really make me happy, but we need to wait and see. I'm glad you enjoyed it :pinkiesmile:

ENJOYED?! This was one of the best stories I have EVER read! :scootangel:

I loved the story. Sad fics are a personal favorite of mine when done properly, and this one was done well.

691208 another sad Fic fan! :pinkiehappy:

691231

They're the best. Slap anyone who says otherwise. :pinkiecrazy: Although I do like comedies, a funny sad fic would be dynamite in my opinion.

This is great, very good job my friend. :yay:

And you know now that explains Big Mac's speaking in "Ponyvillie Confidential" the CMC unintentionally embarrassed him and it made him mad, can't say I blame the guy but at least that time as well as in "Applebuck Season" he BARELY managed to keep his anger in check. :eeyup: (Big Mac is a hidden badarse)

691588........:rainbowhuh:......... I love you! I didn't think anyone hade made the connection. So happy you recognised it! YOU just really made my night! Thank you! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Wonderfully put together. Thank you for the read.... I think I'll go and call my parents now

This is just awesome,I wanted to cry but d'aw :yay:

Darn, someone already mentioned the symmetry between Bog Mac's silence and anger with Ponyville Confidential. Le sigh.
This was sad! I felt really bad for Big Mac but even moreso for AJ for some reason. I thought it flowed really well, too,

The one thing that stood out to me most as for as con. crit. goes is when Granny Smith enters the room. Though I'm sure you meant to say she was "illuminated" by the light of the candle, it actually says"eliminated" and it kind of made me giggle.

697979 glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

quite sad, but very well written :twilightsmile: good job :yay:
the way i see mig mac now has totaly changed, it fits with how he is.
These stories that fill out what was left blank in the series are great, gives a better picture of the whole thing :twilightsmile:
Thank you for writing such a good fanfic :scootangel:

706757 Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :pinkiehappy:Trying my hardest to keep The Big Mac thing I've had going on going! Dunno if you wanna keep an eye out but Big Mac and Fluttershy shipp if you wanna check it out when it's finally out! :pinkiesmile:

This gave me man tears bro! Much respect!

739656 I'm glad! Well i'm glad about tears but.... You get it! :rainbowlaugh: thankyou kndly! :eeyup:

oh god.
you are so good at this.
right now, as i'm typing this, i'm sobbing. my dad just came in and asked why i was crying. I told him it was because of the story and he thought i was joking.
What other fics do you have?

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derp

781126 if you want sad, i have a pretty sad scootaloo one, one based on the missery of being imortal, and a REALLY sad discord origins story :pinkiehappy:

781126 alo i'm unbeleivably happy that it got you to react that way! Makes it all worth while when that happens! xD

I wonder why I was being a plothole in this.

781384 No kidding! Do you have any others?

816036A happy vinyl scratch meeting octavia, a romance 'tween mac and flutt, another romance 'tween shining armour and cadence, sad diary entries bout luna becoming nightmare moon, ummma triligy HiE series, aaaand a rather long epic adventure With interdementional ponies comming to Equestria:derpytongue2: thats it i think xD

816220 I really like the sound of the Nightmare Moon Fic!:pinkiesmile:.
I'll try it out soon:raritywink:.

Poor Apple Family. :fluttershysad:

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