• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2016

Slick Dash


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Luna keeps feeling something...something dead and cold ever since she returned from being Nightmare Moon, she finally decides to investigate the feeling, with dissterous consequences!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 7 )

Looks good, and I believe FIRST for the first time :yay:

I want to see where this goes, your Luna is great, she seems so vulnerable which is I don't know endearing?

Why am I only allowed to like this once????? :raritydespair:

Words cannot even begin to express how mind blowingly amazing this is. Honestly, you as the author should be PROUD, damn proud of what you have done here. I have seen many great stories on this site, but this has got to be just about the best. :heart:

1144762 :pinkiegasp:you really liked it that much? :pinkiesad2:thankyou, im so happy it got that kind of reaction! :pinkiehappy:

Wonderfully done! :pinkiehappy:
Very descriptive I can almost feel the atmosphere and emotions everypony felt. My only complaint is a few grammar issues and typos, but not enough to hurt the story, bravo!

This story deserves lots of attention. Its great storyline and the way it slots in with the canon storyline filling in most plot holes makes it amazing. The thrill that I got off this story was more than words can explain. The emphasis put into every detail within this word bank is incredible. You deserve lots more credit than what you are getting at the moment. I wouldn't be shocked if this surpasses the likes of 'cupcakes'. I can't put into words how great a thrill I got from my eyes assessing each word. You have made a masterpiece. More glorious than a glory hole. The suspense and build up will put anyone, brony or non brony, on the edge of their seats. This is amazing. You are amazing. You should feel amazing.

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