• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2016

Slick Dash


The sequel to my story "My little dream girl" set eleven months after Tom and Rainbow finally are together. As their one year anniversery fast approaches, tragedy strikes the couple. leaving the loving world the two had began in far behind. No wings are flapping, and no tires are spinning. There is no speed, no racing, only emptiness...

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 76 )

A manly tear has been shed this day...

Can't wait to see where you take this.

Holy cow you read quick! :pinkiegasp: thankyou :twilightsmile:

266237 You and me both brother

267666 :pinkiesmile:will do:twilightsmile: next chapter is the same time tomorrow my good sir:moustache:

I'm liking it. Keep going.:moustache:

Wow... so.. sad.. keep going with this...

why make such a sad story :fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair: can u give use a hint on if he will come back

272696 I'm sorry, but I'm not giving any hints xP I'm glad you're finding it as sad as i did when writing it though :twilightsheepish: I'm about to post another chapter, due to the lateness of the last one cossa the stupid internet giving out yesterday:yay:

God this story is so sad:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: But I am loving this story and I cannot wait till the rest comes out :raritywink:

to sad:fluttercry: to make a good comment

God this story always make me cry with different chapters :fluttercry::raritydespair:

why is it so sad ?:fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::fluttershbad:

274852 I really wanted to test my ability at writing stories from an emotional standpoint. my first one (i think) was a succes with being emotional on the whole "not gonna happen" kind of love that works out in the end point.
So this one I wanted to test my ability to actually creeate a sad story which connects to the reader on an emotional level :P
Really hope its worked out so far. and i hope everyone is still enjoying reading this story :twilightblush:

Maybe Rainbowdash will have Luna check her memories, and realize that nightmare moon placed a curse on the mane six denying them love?

Or perhaps Luna killed him, for fear of the human "corrupting" her subjects.

I have more but, it can wait. Looking forward to the next chapter.


wow what is going to happen:pinkiegasp:

oh yes im first:pinkiehappy: cant wait to see what happens :derpytongue2:

Interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

oh shits about to go down :rainbowdetermined2: and i think im first :pinkiehappy:

This is so Much better than the first one and i cant wait to see sjat happens next

And i especially like when you made spike Spell that word and hé couldnt it really made mé see who it was writing the letter


If she hurts Woona without evidence I swear....

282050>>282297 glad you're bpth enjoyign the story so far :) 282297 well you're about to find out. next chapter being put up now :)

*flips table because he has to wait for new update*

I think my job is done for now

Dash is gonna free Discy, ain't she.:ajbemused:

hole crap just attacked a princes nice move:ajsmug:

Uh oh. It horrible when your "friends" won't consider you being truthful.:pinkiesad2:

See ya next uodate.


Edit: Unless this is all an illusion.:rainbowderp:

Wow! Didn't see that coming. Well played sir/madam.:pinkiegasp:


......Summon. The Daedra. Now. And murder. Him.

omg am so emotional right now its sad that tom didnt come back :fluttercry: but at least dash got over it

Nooooooo!!!! Bring Tom back. :fluttercry: Awww, I'm sad it's over. Ah well. I hope to see a new story soon. :)

284690 I'm a sir, my good man :moustache: glad you liked the twist :rainbowwild:
286539 I'm working on a new one now :twilightsmile: may take few days before i can post any chapters, but testing out my ability at writing different styles so hopefully peeps will like it as much as they did this little series xD

damn.. i really expected him to come back in some form... but great story nonetheless

also.. pretty decently sad... had me close to crying twice. [I have not yet cried to a fic and have read hundreds of fics]

287860:twilightsmile: well i'll take that as an acheivement :) glad you liked it:pinkiesmile:

while i was reading this Pearl Jam's Last kiss song came on, it was too much...

I may need to re-evaluate my last critique. I still think that Dream girl was the more original piece, but this one has so much more emotion and depth in it than your previous stories. I'm sure your next story will be mind blowing if you can intertwine this incredible feeling of emotion as well as the depth that comes from a well thought story. :fluttercry::pinkiehappy:
thats right, I'm happy and sad.

I am sad. :fluttercry:
Why am I sad. :fluttershysad:
This is so sad. :fluttercry:
I am sad. :raritycry:

307500 I'm enough of a man to admit that chapter 2 did get to me when I was writing it :derpytongue2:

Slick... I'm five chapters in, and I have to ask. Have you any idea just how hard i'm fighting the urge to just cry? By the way this series of yours is fantastic, I stayed reading it from the very beginning about 2 hours ago. I just dread what these next nine chapters have in store.

328842 thank you so much :pinkiesmile: im glad it's having the desired effect on you :derpytongue2: but thankyou :) im glad you're enjoying the series so far :twilightsmile: glad to know that people are enjoying it :)

best half an hour of my life if i do say so my self

even though i am a girl

I totally expect luna to be manipulating her dreams :twilightsmile:
this is going to be epic:rainbowdetermined2:

586216 Hope you're enjoying it :twilightsmile: seeing as this is the top rated of the trilegy and you loved the first one so much! :derpytongue2:

Fuck manly tears! I'm cryin' like a lil' bitch an I'm proud of it!:raritydespair:

709703 glad you're enjoying it! :pinkiesmile: In my eyes, it just gets sadder aqas it goes on, so you're in for a treat :derpytongue2:

Fuck manly tears!:pinkiesad2:

I’m so sorry.
my life

My Eyes...
Wait are you hinting a comeback?!?!?! :pinkiegasp:
:pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

*Visibly Shrinks Towards Ground*
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!! :fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad:

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