A young man is driving home on a cold icy night. A crash causes him to wake in an odd forest, there he meets a magenta unicorn, who helps him heal before showing him her friends. While waiting for the ever slow Celestia to find him a way back home, the young man begins to fall for a certain pony in Ponyville. But this strange connection is tested to its boundries as unkown obsticles stand in his way of being with the pony of his dreams.
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sorry no clue what you mean, kinda tired, 1 more what? Chapter? 
Looking good so far so I'll track.
I suggest breaking those paragraphs up a lot more. Those large walls of text can be intimidating.
Good story nonetheless.
235839 Thnx for feed back man
There done some editing, a lot needs to be kept in those same paragraphs but is that any better at all?
235883 That's better.
Keep up the good work.
235890 eyes reaching that fuzzy feeling after staring at computer screen for so long!
but the story is coming on reaaaly well, next chapter either reaaaalllly late tonight or possibly half way through the day tomorrow, depending because i need to make sure i dont close the gap up betwean releasing chapter's and writing them, about 4 ahead atm xP
237204 so far so good, you earned a thumb and a track!
Damn you work quick... Keep it up.
238718 thanks, i will :) also ive already written a load of chapter's already, im simply not posting them all at once, so i can keep working on the new ones without feeling rushed :)
FUCK YOU CLIFFHANGERS!
Cliff hangers... You have learned well. Now write.
242537 Y thnk you. next chapter release is at 3:00 PM (UK)
242577 good. I'll be waiting.
242589 glad to know
yay im first
and its a nice story 
243263 thankyou, i'm writting the final chapter as we speak
Loving this story, cannot wait for the rest
243947 just what i was hoping for, and exactly how i felt when writing it it!
...................manly tears...........have been shed.....
Can't Wait. I must admit, you have quite an awesome story.
Heart = Broken
Awww poor guy. His heart's been crushed
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I know exactly how that poor guy is feeling (in my case with a human
Still awesome story looking forward to the rest
Awesome chapter / story so far!
I'd like to see what you have planned next.
247511 glad to hear you like it!
well you only got 20 minutes to wait 
need moar!!!!
and im first
Nicely climactic end to the chapter you wrote there. Frankly i haven't been commenting on every chapter simply because you release them quicker than i am used to, not saying its a bad thing, it just keeps me from writing a comment when i know there is more to be read.
Eager to see the next part.
This is a Great story, You did great from the 1st person perspective of RD, and i would gladly read your next story if it was done as well as this one, but I wouldn't doubt that!
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glad you both are enjoying it :)
glad you are enjoying it still 
Thank you very much both of you
firepony... you have been on the comments of this tale before....
247788 you are one of the people who has followed this from very early on. thank you
Shit Just Got Real.
Tracked. Good story so far bro.
what is it tell me !!!!! tell me !!!!! tell me !!!!!!
Nice twist!
I'm honestly guessing it's a cutie mark that's similar or complimenting of Rainbow Dash's. But that's just my thoughts. :P
Ahahah! Random shipping! And THATS why I LOVE your stories!
237204
If it's on his hand.. I THINK IT'S A HOOF
I bet it's just some random ass horn in the middle of his hand
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thankyou. Hope you like it seeing as your on chapter 3 
enjoy it!
This was a excellant story and I hope you do as well or even better on any future stories you plan on making.
... Keep on writing... Not on this one but others since this was very well crafted my friend. I really enjoyed this one so you earn this gold star. But I has s question... Did the magic potion turn him into a pony or did he end up staying human?
ADVENTURE TIME!
250263 The magic inside the potion he put into the car simply helped him realise his ability with magic, he can't use it like ponies because he isnt one. but he can focus into something he loves, like his car. the potion never actually touched him, he thought it may have so thats why his hand burnt. but actually it was simply his body realising his need for speed, so the cutiemark began to form. by the end of his convosation with Celestia, and she unwrapped it. he new he loved Rainbow so the mark was complete. he stays human, but thats why everyone is so shocked at the sight of the cutiemark on him when he sorts out his shirt in the libraryy.
Hope that cleared it up :) glad you liked it!
250329 That was an awesome story, I really, really hope that you take the time to make a new one. This little tale finally got me out of my funk and got me writing again so I thank you for that as well.
250561 you are are very welcome
I'm writing YET ANOTHER ONE! but may take a little time, so will release a short Discord story inbetween times