• Member Since 29th Jun, 2012
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Seraphic Borealis


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You have been in Equestria for several months now and you have gotten to know the Mane 6. There is, however, one pony you have fallen in love with. You have been planning what to say to her. The moment has finally come. How will she react? Will the outcome be content?

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goddamn it. this pretty much explains how my life with girls go -_-..... but anyways it was a really good story.

Thank Celestia for that ending... too many happy-go-lucky self inserts nowadays...

Edit: Also, you may want to add in the 'Other' character tag since the two main characters is Rainbow Dash and the human.

Reminds me of a few days ago......So sad......:fluttercry:

The part with Pinkie reads:

"I can feel my red getting hot."

Might want to fix that.

Nice story. Reminds me of basically every relationship ive had thoug:fluttercry:h

I loved it. Just wish she would have said yes.:fluttercry:
Also, I love the reference to Vincent. "I could have told you Dashie, this world was never meant for one as beautiful as you."

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Wow! I didn't think anyone would get the song reference!

Well, that was a hugh kick in the balls....lol but it was well written at least.:rainbowwild:

I loved it personally. Very very well written.

Story of my life...:facehoof:

That was good wish there was a sequel

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