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The winner of my contest last week, congratulations Derpy_pie! The story is about the aftermath of when Rainbow leaves to join the Wonderbolts, leaving Scootaloo and her best friend Pinkie behind. How can either cope with the loss of their rainbow maned friend and idol?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 35 )

That was amazing, i loved every line of it.
You won that competition for a reason.
:scootangel:

375293 thank you very much :pinkiesmile:
but this was the prize for the competition, i held one, and the winner got a story written about the two characters they chose, the Winner was Derpy_Pie :rainbowwild:
But still thank you! Glad you enjoyed it all! :pinkiehappy:

Amazing fic I give the 5 out of 5 moustaches and a scootaloo :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::scootangel:

375323
oh, well its definitely a good prize then!

Beautiful. Touching. Emotional. Perfect :scootangel:

Cute story. I honestly didn't like the final chapter until I got toward the end. This wasn't a bad write. A few mistakes here and there, but nothing major. It kinda makes me sad that I half expect Dash to end up doing that.

2 hooves up!
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This was a nice read. I'm glad there was happiness in this. Thank you :pinkiesmile:

I've actually imagined Rainbow Dash throwing Scootaloo under the bus like that. Except in my scenario, Scoot completely breaks down mentally and emotionally, and she reemerges later as basically a psychopath, and she attacks and cripples Dash, then murders her husband and foal in front of her.

Why am I so into grimdark now? O.o

375541 now that would be a fic I'd read! Scoot needs a grimdark for herself after everything with rainbow factory!

being unable to act like a normal Pegasy shouldn't that be Pegasi?
Sigh... sorry to be that guy. I have misty eyes already if it makes you look at me better.

375632 NO! It doesn't i hate you forever! :flutterrage:
.......:raritywink:
No worries man, thnx for the heads up. Glad it got a good reaction from you! :pinkiehappy: dont hate you really! :rainbowwild:

If she hadn’t leafed "leaved" probably would have been better. You also did "Pegasy" again.
GAH WHY AM I BECOMING A GRAMMAR NAZI NOW?!
Great story. I may have only misty-eyed but it was exactly what I needed. Thank you Derpy-Pie for coming up with this idea.

P.S. Almost forgot!
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375655 If you ever need a proof-reader I'd be happy to help. I got a grammar nazi friend and he kinda rubbed off on me a bit after a few months of him freaking out about EVERYTHING I did wrong in grammar.

YEEEEESSSSSSS!!!! This Was AWESOME!!!!!! It was better then I thot!!! I loved it thanks so much for making this story! :scootangel::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

375782 congrats again man! Hope you enjoyed your prize :) now to moce on to the next big story! Really looking forward to it! :pinkiehappy:
Cant start tonight though, too depressed about how after 8 years the anime ive watched religiously finally ended! That combined with mass effect! Just too sad! :fluttershysad::fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry::applecry:

tracked for reading later... I have a list to work through already.

How?!
How are you doing this?!:pinkiegasp:
You went from mldg to completely finding your style of fiction. The 'Sad' tag is most definitely owned by you now.
Its almost sickening, how awesome you've gotten with this genre. Every story just keeps getting better and better. :scootangel:
At least I know who to come for advice, when wanting to write sad moments now, huh?:raritywink:

Sweet story man! Can't wait for the next one!

~8chill

379170 Oh, trust me. The big story I'm making. Plenty of that! :twilightsmile: thankyou so much man! Glad you think I'm that good at sad stuff! :pinkiehappy: strangly find it the most fun to wright :derpytongue2:

liking it for now....

PS. why is there no comment on first chapter?:rainbowhuh:

548581 I honestly have no idea :derpytongue2:
and glad to hear it! :pinkiesmile:

I love this story... it actually made me cry a bit.:fluttercry:
keep up the good work!:heart:

375632
misty eyes?
I'm downright crying... so sad, but so good:heart:

I loved every single chapter of it! GREAT work!:heart::pinkiehappy::scootangel::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

548721 im very glad you liked it, always happy to get such a enthusiastic reaction! :pinkiehappy:

I challenge you to a contest to see who can write the sadder story! Winner gets nothing and loser to say the least gets noticed for trying. You in?

597686 i'm writing one this very instant :pinkiecrazy: so you're on if you like?

Whats the grounding of the story and who are the characters? I'll just let you post it on your page along with the one you are writing right now (If it's a one shot that is). Just tell them it was by me of course.

597996 well i won't be able to come up with a new propperly sad thing influences my life, but the one I'm talking about is the one i mentioned on my blog, discord origin story, pretty sad at the moment :P

I have a Discord story. But it's more along the lines of a Tragedy rather than a Sad story.

Check mine out some time, I'll be sure to read something else of yours soon. Probably now if anything. I'm extremely bored Brony 598063 lol

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