Epilogue: Seeing the Finale Battle And Reunion
Twilight and the others were continuing to watch Spike's journey, they see Sage tell them about the other option and agree to it, they watch with fascination as there are multiple Spike clones created.
"So they can learn they're own things and the real one can gain that knowledge as well? Interesting" Celestia said as they watched.
They watched Spike and Amy travel together and see the new moves Spike's learned, they see him collecting the emeralds and him and Knuckles smashing the devices and Ember smiled at that.
"Looks like he's able to handle his own combat now" Ember said as he watched them do they're work.
They kept on watching things happen, from the sound getting louder and louder which made them worried, and Spike climbing the towers with Sonic.
"He really is something else to be climbing all of those without us.." Twilight said amazed
"He really has grown over this adventure.." Thorax said seeing them continue.
They watch them do the trails of the Pilots and just couldn't believe that he actually met them.
"He officially is the toughest one here" Applejack said as they finished the Trials.
"It's interesting that they are able to meet them, wonder what the other's would be like before they were warriors" Ember asked with the others nodding interested as well.
They then witness Spike going through the master king's trial, and they feel bad that he had to go through all of that.
"I'm glad i'm not there right now" Rainbow dash said feeling bad.
"I don't think any other dragon in Equestria could have done that.." Ember said feeling bad as well with the others nodding.
They all saw the power come into them and watch in amazement, they here the king speak to Spike.
"You however are very lucky, that power was meant for you specifically" The king told him and they looked astonished that Spike was meant to get such a power, they hear them talk about Spike's mother and become more and more curious in what she's like. They all look on as they made they're way to the final battle.
"This is it, the final fight" Twilight said worried.
"You think he'll be okay?" fluttershy asked worried
"Given what he's been through so far.. i know he will" Luna said and they all nodded in agreement.
They watch the final Titan emerge as the music starts to play, they watch in amazement as the battle begins.
"Leave the life you knew before! See a new world worth fighting for!!" Spike sang as he and Sonic were fighting it, they were all bopping they're heads to how great the song was.
"Find the truth of who i'm meant to become!! Another path i must now walk on!" Spike sang as he kept attacking it.
"He really has become his own person now" Twilight said really proud.
"He really is his own hero now!" Pinkie said with a smile.
They watched the rest of the battle play out and just couldn't believe how well he was doing, he then delivers the final strike and cheer as it's defeated.
"He won! Awesome!" Rainbow dash said excitedly, but Ember knew something was wrong.
"Hold on a minute.." Ember said worried, they were confused for a moment, but look on with horror as a huge moon comes down and latches onto the Titan.
"This shell was once my prison, now it shall be the avatar of my return, all shall return to order, to oblivion" It said as the thing activated, they all got chills down they're spines as it said that.
They all watch as the monster become The End, and the arms come out of its back like its being ripped out.
Spike and Sonic close they're eyes and they watch as the power flows through them.
Spike's body grows more and more and Twilight's eyes widen as she sees him become larger then the Titan itself.
"This really is the final battle.." Twilight said amazed as they entered they're new forms.
"Where is that music coming from?" Eggman asks and they see the Spike clone smirk.
"It's my boss music!" The clone says and they laugh at that.
"Well then it's a really awesome boss theme!" Pinkie says as they hear the song play out.
They watch the battle play out and watch in amazement as Spike goes full power on this thing, they see him using every skill he learned through the adventure to wreck it up. Twilight just couldn't believe how much he's grown.
They watched Sonic bring out the Titans gun and watch in amazement as Spike takes it.
"No way.." Rainbow dash says with her jaw on the floor.
"Come with me.. i'm standing on the border of everything, listen close, can you hear the spirits sing lost messages of long ago?" Spike's voice is heard as they watch the music become more epic as they here a new version of it.
"Leave the life you knew before, see a new world worth fighting for!!" Spike's voice is heard as Spike fires multiple shots at the thing while using his sword.
"Find the truth of who i'm meant to become!! Another path i must now walk on!!" Spike sings as they watch him rip off the monsters arms which surprised them on that.
"He really is not holding back anymore" Thorax said surprised at that.
"He isn't a hatchling anymore.." Ember said looking at the battle continue.
They watch them prepare their final moves, they see Sonic go INTO the gun and go full power.
"Sorry master king! It looks like we're going all out after all!!" Sonic said as they watched, everyone watches in amazement as they use the Cyber power and they're bodies start moving around like crazy, they see Eggman aim the weapon at the monster while Spike ready's his final attack.
" DRAGON FIST!!!!" Spike shouted as he and Eggman fired at the monster, they watch in amazement as a huge golden dragon flies at the moon along with Sonic and everyone cheers as they see them win as they destroy the Titan and the moon itself.
"Standing here, the way aheads become clear!! All across these new frontiers, in my hands i hold the ones i love walk forward through the cold dawn!! Always to new horizons!" Spike's voice finishes as the moon is destroyed.
Everyone in the audience cheers as they have witnessed the best battle they have ever seen, they see Spike grab the weapon and he begins to shrink back to how he was before along with the weapon.
"Guess someone has to use this.." Spike says as they see him latch the weapon onto his back.
"He gets to keep that?!!?" Rainbow dash said amazed.
"Guess so!" Pinkie said happy at that, they watch them all celebrate as they won and they see the shot of Eggman and Sage together with Sage completely blue.
"You did well Sage, it's time to head home.. dear daughter" Eggman says and they all smile at that.
"Home? I like the sound of that.. Father" Sage says as he takes his hand and just feel great about the happy ending. They see her teleport to Spike and they see them become friends and smile at that as she leaves
"I'm glad things turned out well" Celestia said with a smile with all of them nodding.
"I still can't believe he just destroyed a moon." Luna said still surprised and they all laugh at that.
They would have talked more but they see Spike and his friends near a Cyber portal. They all realize why they are there.
"You sure this will work?" Knuckles asked as he was impatient.
"Master king said she'd be free after we defeated The End, so it should be a little bit." Spike said remembering what he was told.
"He's about to meet her..." Fluttershy said with a few tears.
"I wonder what she's like?" Ember asked curious as well.
They didn't have to wait long as they gasp when the portal activates, they watch in amazement as they see someone emerge from it and land on the ground. They all get a good look at the figure and realize she looks exactly like Spike.
"She really is his mother.." Twilight said with tears.
They hear a soft piano play as they see Spike and Angel look at eachother.
"S..Son..?" She askes starting to cry.
"It's me.. i'm with you.. Mother." Spike said crying as well, they watch as Spike and his mother hug and they cry seeing the beautiful ruin, they hear soft music play as things fade to black.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=razdk0Mp0Ro
( I'm with you vocal)
They then hear what sounds like Spike's mother's voice singing
" Now i'm not alone, a family of my own, i get to go home with you" She sings and they all watch moments from the adventure as she sings.
"Feelings deep inside come flowing through my eyes, i get to go home with you" She sings as they cry from how beautiful it is.
"All the lives, up in the sky, all the times, i spent by your side. Taught me love, and taught me pain" She sings as the dragons watch as they have tears of they're own.
" Things that i, can never have explained. now i'm not alone, a family of my own, i get to go home with you" She sings more.
"She is a great singer" Twilight says as they hear the rest play out.
"I hope things go well from here on.." Fluttershy said as the song was nearing its finish.
"Home sweet home, home with you, home sweet home.. i'm with you.." She finishes as they all cheer at the performance.
"That was.. beautiful" Rainbow dash said as they all were crying.
"At least Spike will have someone by his side.." Twilight said crying as well.
They see one more shot of them, Spike was with his mother while Tails and the others were near a plane, Sonic then came up to them.
"So, that was fun." Sonic said and they all groaned at that.
"Seriously Sonic, not now man." Spike said with his mother agreeing.
"But i guess we should get going, i know we all have big plans" Sonic told them.
"Your gonna hardly recognize me when i get back!" Tails said with a smile.
"Maybe Cream and Sticks are available, we could make a road trip out of it!" Amy said excitedly.
" I can't wait to start this band of ours, wonder where our first performance is gonna be?" Knuckles asked and Spike smiled.
"Somewhere special, i can't wait to tell you about all of the stuff i've ben through mom!" Spike said looking at her.
"I'm looking forward to it! I can't wait!" She said happily and they all smiled at that.
"We're wasting daylight! Let's go!" Sonic said getting on the plane, Tails activates the plane and they watch as Spike and his mother fly together along with them as they leave the island.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVHDBSlPyFk
( Vandalize By One Ok Rock)
They hear one more song play as multiple parts of the adventure plays, they hear Spike's voice sing one more time.
"Send me alone, shatter me like glass, covered in scars, where roses are coming through the cracks' Spike sings as they see them fighting off.
" Time that you killed, your promise to help me reveal, feels like you planned it, you caught me off guard, sound the alarm!" Spike sings as they see them facing the titans
"Said you'd keep me safe now your tearing me down, am i laid to waist now that your not around. come and leave your mark! Vandalize my hear" Spike sings and everyone jams out to the music.
"Fight the pain away, my head is in ruins, need you in my veins don't know how you do it! Come and leave your mark, Vandalize my heart!!" Spike sings and the song continues, they continue to listen to it all and the song soon ends.
"Said you'd keep my safe now your tearing me down, am i laid to waste now that your not around? Come and leave your mark, Vandalize my heart.." Spike finishes as the song ends and things fade to black, everything becomes clear again as the vision disappears and they find themselves back in the castle
"What an adventure.." Twilight said in amazement.
"He handled it all by himself without us" Applejack said surprised.
"And now he's got new friends and his mother with him.." Ember said still processing this..
"Guys.. i think it's best we let him go out on his own, he's got his own mother with him and i think i'll be fine if he's without us for sometime" Twilight said as she thought it over much to their shock.
"Twilight are you sure?" Celestia asked worried and she nodded.
"After what Spike went through, he can handle himself now, it may be sometime before any of us see him again.. but it will be okay, i know we'll see him one day again" Twilight said and they all thought over it and decided it was best to just let it happen.
"Your right, he'll be okay, i just hope things turn out good in the end" Fluttershy said hopefully.
"I'm sure they will twilight, let's all go home and just focus on our duty's for now, it's.. been a long day for us" Celestia said a little tired.
They all nodded in agreement and went they're ways for now, They just hoped that one day they could see they're friend again...
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yep, really really
This was really great
Question: Why didn't you use One Way Dream for this Story?
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sorry if that confused you but i personally feel like it's something that reflects Spike and the adventure he went on in this story, sorry again if you could be a little upset about it
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I'm not upset. I was just merely curious
So spikes not gonna see his equestrian friends again or is there something else
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like i said in a future story, i have other stories planned though
Read before replying, thank you
God do I hate making this comment.
Cause I’m here (heh) to critique for a little bit. Now I’m not saying this story sucks or anything, just my overall thoughts on it and the issues that really irked me throughout, but first the positives.
Spoilers for those who haven’t read the story yet, do so before reading this comment.
1. Spike’s interactions with (Most of) the Sonic characters, his friendship with Sonic and his friends was nice too see and how they supported him throughout the journey. Which is made better with how Spike bounced off their personalities really well, and I wasn’t internally cringing. (Mostly)
I’ve kinda can’t think of anything else that really made me go ‘That was pretty cool’
So onto issues I had.
1. Spike’s character is not… very… good. That’s not to say he was horrible or completely stripped from grace, but he’s treated as if he cannot make any major mistakes. He just knows what the right thing to say is, and just gets kind of boring by the time we get to rhea island.
2. The mistreatment towards Spike in the series is something that while yes is a good idea to have a narrative dive into how he feels, one thing almost everyone misses is the fact that both sides are in the wrong.
Yes the mane six and everyone else don’t realise that they mistreat Spike badly throughout, but Spike is also not that much better as he never brings it up to them at all. Yes he has the right to be angry, but he should also be taking responsibility for not even mentioning his issues to them in the first place.
Which is why I hate fics of Spike being mistreated then he just becomes a full on jackass, this ain’t one of those fics but it neglects how he isn’t fully innocent.
3. The Equestrians served no purpose other than just to react, and that’s it… it would’ve been more interesting if the mane six were trapped as well on the islands in some way. (Don’t ask me how.) And Spike proves himself, which in turn makes the mane six see him in a new light and help him during the finale.
And by the end of the story, they let him make his own decision to decide his own path. It would’ve been really sweet alongside the plot line of Spike’s mom.
4. Spike and Sonic singing the boss themes… I know I’m a terrible person. This in my honest opinion makes the fights less interesting, and absolutely makes me cringe cause what made those fights so cool was not only all the crazy stuff you did during those fights but also the fact that Sonic didn’t say a single word throughout.
Which made it even cooler. Honestly what would’ve worked better is that it is background music that the cast could hear which gives them motivation to fight at their best. Especially the final battle.
It would at least have them acknowledge the songs existence but it would’ve made the whole making a band part with Spike, Sonic and Knuckles more understandable as they would be inspired.
5. The pacing is too fast usually Cutting through the whole thing making it as thin layered as possible, which everything feel rushed as the characters would get from point A to point B in a matter of seconds. A little more depth would’ve been nice.
6. (This more of a pet peeve than anything) The dialogue for whenever a character speaks needs to be fixed.
Instead of it being like:
“Hey Spike how are you doing?” Sonic asked his friend.
“Oh I’m doing great Sonic!” Spike replied back excited.
It should be more like:
“Hey Spike how are you doing?” Sonic asked his friend.
“Oh I’m doing great Sonic!” Spike replied back excited.
7. Spike and Sage’s friendship goes nowhere, I was kind of expecting some sort of goodbye or a thank you between them but they just kind of forget each other. Not sure if they were really friends but it seemed to be heading that way, and it was something worth seeing have some sort of conclusion of how they view each other.
8. The ending is so abrupt everything is fine if Spike’s end but the equestrians just find out, about how the spell they casted had all of Equestria watching which is stupid and out of nowhere.
And it just ends with the characters going… “Okay let’s go after him, because we need to.”
9. The last thing I’ll bring up that was just really unnecessary we’re the Spike clones, they were made just for the sake of us seeing what Amy, Knuckles and Tails were doing which would’ve worked without the clones.
It’s okay to write those moments without Spike, he doesn’t need to be in every part of the story.
So after everything I have said, I can conclude that this story is… alright.
I think the biggest issue is that it feels like an early draft, that needed more time in the oven to really flash out the ideas and plot points. All of the issues listed above are what apply to the early draft statement, cause in all honesty this story has the potential to be great.
Now don’t go changing the story because of what I said, instead take this as a way to improve and make your future projects better than what came before. Cause what I see here is a writer who can make great things, if they learn from their mistakes.
So I hope this at least helps give a bit of insight. I thank you for taking the time to read this long comment, and understand what you could do too improve. Anyway take care.
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don't worry, i'll try to be better, sorry for having those issues, again i'm still only starting to write stories and stuff so forgive me okay
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Don’t worry. I’m not mad, or anything like that. I just wanted list off some issues is all, cause I guarantee you’ll be creating some really good stories as you continue forward.
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just rewrote the last bit of the ending so they all accept that Spike will be okay, so they'll focus on stuff at home and Spike can do his own thing
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Ok, that makes the ending a bit better. Can’t wait to see what you have next in store, for everyone to read.
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also put in a scene where they said thank you to each other, thank you for those little nitpicks i think it will help make it a little better, while i will be doing more crossover stories, i see that it's important that i put in more character for my main character, its important, again thank you for this
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You’re welcome.
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also got rid of the unnessicary thing where Equestria sees it all, your right it is stupid, i'm glad you pointed that out,
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You’re welcome.
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this is why i like reading comments on things, they help give me critique's in order to help make things better, it's important to read them to help improve and talk with other people. Unlike some other movies i know " cough" Ralph Breaks The Internet " cough".
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Yeah, me too.
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besides all of this can be cleared up in a rewrite or a future story, i think with what you told me it could make a better story in the future, just would have to give an organic reason as to why they came to the islands
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Who knows maybe when they find a cyberspace portal with Spike, it ends up sending them to islands. Two per island and such. I don’t know just thinking on a very surface level.
Nice story, not sure about the ending though with Spike & his mom not seeing the rest of his equestria family/friends but guess you can't have everything!
Good work & still hoping to see a sequel of your first story showing Spike living/learning alongside his fellow dragons, and maybe growing closer to a certain orange dragoness!
Till the next story Dragonfan!
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did you listen to the new version of i'm here? I sent the link, and if so i hope you liked it
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I did, it was awesome! 😎👍
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Sonic music never fails to slap, this is one of my favorite songs in the series.
I honestly thought she'd be pissed off that he destroyed half of it.
*Me realizing that she was talking about Spike*
Oh wait, nevermind, I thought she was talking about Eggman!
By the way, have you played Devil May Cry before?